From d87e452992832dd7d3ee1b94be582c381e0110f9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Daniel Foerster Date: Wed, 3 Jun 2015 16:37:17 -0500 Subject: Rossy dialog — fix fix fixes MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt b/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt index 52aa51bb..ff02d72c 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ L_Next: L_SheWorried: mes "[Rossy]"; - mes "\"Really? But she let us play in the woods. There's no reason to be worried – unless ...\""; + mes "\"Really? But she let us play in the woods. There's no reason to be worried – unless....\""; next; mes "Rossy suddenly gets a strange look on her face, mumbling something about Julia."; next; @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ L_SheWorried: mes "\"Could you do me a favor? Please, tell my mother that we're alright. There's ... well ... there's no reason to worry about us.\""; next; menu - "Alright, if you say so.", L_SaySo, + "Very well, if you say so....", L_SaySo, "Sorry, but I don't time for this.", L_No; L_SaySo: @@ -100,14 +100,14 @@ L_HaveSomeCherries: mes "[Rossy]"; set Rossy_Quest, 4; getexp @Cherry_EXP, 0; - mes "\"I can't believe it, you got them all! Please give them to my mother. Tell her it is a gift from me and Julia and there's no reason to worry about us.\""; + mes "\"I can't believe it! You got all the cherries needed! Please give them to my mother. Tell her that it is a gift from me and Julia and that there's no reason to worry about us.\""; next; mes "Rossy mumbles to herself."; mes "[Rossy]"; - mes "\"I hope ...\""; + mes "\"I hope....\""; next; mes "[Rossy]"; - mes "\"Oh, after you give the cherries to my mother, please come back here. If you have some free time, of course.\""; + mes "\"Oh, and after you give the cherries to my mother, please come back here. Err, if you have some free time, of course.\""; close; L_Cherry_Done: @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ L_Donet: L_DavidPotion: mes "[Rossy]"; - mes "\"Yay! Phew! That was close; I almost forgot about my exam. Please, tell my mother about it. I'm sure she'll be proud of me.\""; + mes "\"YPhew! That was close: I almost forgot about my exam. Please, tell my mother about my success for me. I'm sure she'll be pleased.\""; close; L_RG: @@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ L_Julia: L_End: mes "[Rossy]"; - mes "\"Oh no! Julia ... why would you go to that scary place? Have you seen her yet?\""; + mes "\"Oh no! Julia ... why would you go to that scary place? ... Have you seen her yet?\""; menu "She'll be back soon, trust me. I saved her.", L_Found, "I didn't see her yet, sorry.", L_No; @@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ L_Found: set Rossy_Quest, 18; if (Rossy_Quest == 18) set Rossy_Quest, 19; - mes "\"Oh "+ strcharinfo(0) +", thank you very much! Take this, you deserve it!\""; + mes "\"Oh, "+ strcharinfo(0) +", thank you very much! Take this, you deserve it!\""; next; mes "Rossy hands you a huge bag full of coins."; getexp @Finish_EXP, 0; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50