From 9bf115afded2f22a06c99e22a1f864b5c97d83ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Vreality Date: Mon, 5 May 2014 06:49:13 -0500 Subject: Dialogue changes to NPCs Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf." Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog Improved grammar and wording Replaced ". " with ". " Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – "). MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt | 2 +- world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt | 20 ++++++++++---------- 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/008-1') diff --git a/world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt b/world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt index 22985393..2755866c 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/008-1/diryn.txt @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -// This is a teleportation (warp) NPC. Its purpose is to offer expensive, fast trips throughout the world. +// This is a teleportation (warp) NPC. Its purpose is to offer expensive, fast trips throughout the world. // Author: Wombat, wushin // cost depending on level and adapted to new scripting guidelines: Jenalya diff --git a/world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt b/world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt index 3d92de07..f3ada878 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/008-1/hinnak.txt @@ -129,15 +129,15 @@ L_ThanksMenu: menu "Sure, any time!", L_Next1, "Anything else you want me to do?", L_Next1, - "You're welcome. Bye!", L_Bye; + "You're welcome. Bye!", L_Bye; L_Next1: mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; - mes "\"Actually, it's been a long day. If it's no trouble, could you get me a beer?\""; + mes "\"Actually, it's been a long day. If it's no trouble, could you get me a beer?\""; next; menu "Here you are.", L_GiveBeer, - "Sure, I'll go get one. Bye!", L_Bye, + "Sure, I'll go get one. Bye!", L_Bye, "You shouldn't drink while working!", L_Next2; L_Next2: @@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ L_GiveBeer: next; mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; mes "He takes another sip."; - mes "\"Thanks! You know, I had the strangest thing happen to me. I had this patch of ground that was really clumpy; lots of clay, you see.\""; + mes "\"Thanks! You know, I had the strangest thing happen to me. I had this patch of ground that was really clumpy; lots of clay, you see.\""; next; mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; mes "\"Right over there.\""; @@ -167,14 +167,14 @@ L_GiveBeer: mes "\"Looks much better now, doesn't it? But how I got there is kind-a scary...\""; next; mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; - mes "\"I'd been trying to break it up for a while, but that kind of work is a pain. So my wife said that I should go and see the witch, just in case she knows something.\""; + mes "\"I'd been trying to break it up for a while, but that kind of work is a pain. So my wife said that I should go and see the witch, just in case she knows something.\""; next; mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; - mes "\"And sure enough I ask the witch, and she has a look at it. 'Nothing I can do', she says, 'but I can ask a friend'.\""; + mes "\"And sure enough I ask the witch, and she has a look at it. 'Nothing I can do', she says, 'but I can ask a friend'.\""; next; mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; - mes "\"So the next day another witch shows up. Gorgeous woman, but when she looked at me, the scares went scuttling down my spine....\""; - mes "\"First thing she asked was if I'm a farmer. Said her friend had told her that I needed help.\""; + mes "\"So the next day another witch shows up. Gorgeous woman, but when she looked at me, the scares went scuttling down my spine....\""; + mes "\"First thing she asked was if I'm a farmer. Said her friend had told her that I needed help.\""; next; mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; mes "\"I show her what the problem is, and she tells me to go inside and wait.\""; @@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ L_GiveBeer: mes "\"Hinnak drains his beer in one long sip, then hesitates."; next; mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; - mes "\"So I go inside. I'm barely in when it starts raining outside, pouring cats and mouboos!\""; + mes "\"So I go inside. I'm barely in when it starts raining outside, pouring cats and mouboos!\""; next; mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; mes "\"Not so weird, perhaps, except that it was been bright and sunny just a second before! So I rush out, my wife telling me to leave the witch alone, and I see her standing there in the middle of the rain...\""; @@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ L_GiveBeer: L_Sagatha_hahaha: mes "[Farmer Hinnak]"; - mes "\"Yeah, funny now... But you should've seen that stare! Ah, well, never mind.\""; + mes "\"Yeah, funny now... But you should've seen that stare! Ah, well, never mind.\""; goto L_Close; L_Sagatha_scary: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50