From 364f6111306eb4fcdd8edc98dae1ae0727dba712 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nick Ashley Date: Sun, 12 Apr 2015 09:22:38 -0400 Subject: Various dialog fixes in Tulim viz., the Kylian quest, the tombstones, and various other NPCs --- world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt | 18 ++++++++++-------- world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt | 20 ++++++++++---------- 3 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/001-1') diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt index dba78c21..de2966b5 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/adrian.txt @@ -10,29 +10,31 @@ set @state, ((QUEST_NorthTulimshar & NIBBLE_5_MASK) >> NIBBLE_5_SHIFT); mes "[Adrian]"; - mes "\"Hello. Are you here to get the luggage for some of our passengers?\""; + mes "\"Hello. Are you here to pick up some luggage?\""; if (@state == 1) menu - "Yes, Kylian sent me to get his luggage.",L_Get, + "Yes. Kylian sent me to get his luggage.",L_Get, "No.",L_No; menu "No.",L_No; L_No: + next; mes "[Adrian]"; - mes "\"Too bad. I want to go and drink a beer, but I have to wait here until all the luggage is picked up.\""; + mes "\"Too bad. I'd like to go get a beer, but I have to wait here until all the luggage is picked up.\""; mes "He sighs."; goto L_Close; L_Get: + next; mes "[Adrian]"; - mes "\"Wonderful! Show me the ticket.\""; - mes "He checks the paper Kylian gave you and then takes a critical look at you."; + mes "\"Wonderful! Please show me your ticket.\""; + mes "He checks the paper Kylian gave you and then gives you a critical look."; next; getinventorylist; if ((checkweight("LeatherSuitcase", 1) == 0) || (@inventorylist_count == 100)) goto L_Inventory; mes "[Adrian]"; - mes "\"Alright, here it is.\""; + mes "\"Alright. Here it is. Good luck carrying that thing.\""; mes "Adrain hands you a very heavy suitcase."; getitem "LeatherSuitcase", 1; set @state, 2; @@ -41,8 +43,8 @@ L_Get: L_Inventory: mes "[Adrian]"; - mes "\"The suitcase is rather heavy. You doesn't look as if you can handle that."; - mes "Maybe if you get rid of some of the other stuff you're carrying.\""; + mes "\"The suitcase is rather heavy. No offense, but you don't look like you can carry it.\""; + mes "Maybe you should get rid of some of the other stuff you're carrying.\""; goto L_Close; L_Close: diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt index b6159583..ddfddd95 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/ched.txt @@ -3,21 +3,21 @@ 001-1,43,48,0|script|Ched|113 { mes "[Ched]"; - mes "\"I'm trying to get a spell to work. It's supposed to combine two potions, but I can't seem to figure out which two those are...\""; + mes "\"I'm trying to get a spell to work, but I'm having some trouble.\""; + mes "\"It's supposed to combine two potions, but I can't seem to figure out which two to combine...\""; next; menu - "Well, good luck with that!", L_Done, - "What spell is that?", L_Next; + "Good luck with that.", L_Done, + "What spell is it?", L_Next; L_Next: + mes ""; mes "[Ched]"; - mes "\"Well, I don't know what it's called... I took it out of `Timbleweed's Advanced Transmutations.' It seems awfully hard to cast, somehow.\""; + mes "\"Well, I don't remember what it's called... I took it out of 'Timbleweed's Advanced Transmutations,' but it seems awfully hard to cast.\""; next; - mes "[Ched]"; - mes "\"Well, the invocation is `" + getspellinvocation("merge-concentration-potions") + "'. You're supposed to just hold up the potions and cast it, and then they're supposed to merge.\""; + mes "\"If you want to try it, the invocation is '" + getspellinvocation("merge-concentration-potions") + ".' I just can't get the hang of it though.\""; next; - mes "[Ched]"; - mes "\"Maybe I should go back to `detect magic' until I can cast that one properly.\""; + mes "\"Maybe I should go back to practicing '" + getspellinvocation("detect-magic") + "' until I can cast it properly.\" %%6"; goto L_Done; L_Done: diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt index 39c98ade..e064a60d 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/tombstones.txt @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ { mes "~ wushin ~"; - mes "Tonori swallowed him whole."; + mes "\"Tonori swallowed him whole.\""; close; } @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ { mes "~ Nard ~"; - mes "Crushed by a loom."; + mes "\"Crushed by a loom.\""; close; } @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ { mes "~ tux9th ~"; - mes "Eaten by bugs."; + mes "\"Eaten by bugs.\""; close; } @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ { mes "~ o11c ~"; - mes "He asked for it. So they gave it to him."; + mes "\"He asked for it, so they gave it to him.\""; close; } @@ -36,41 +36,41 @@ { mes "~ " + strcharinfo(0) + " ~"; - mes "The tombstone is blank and the grave freshly dug."; + mes "The epitath is blank and the grave freshly dug."; close; } 001-1,56,106,0|script|RIP#6|400 { mes "~ Cassy ~"; - mes "Eaten by trolls."; + mes "\"Eaten by trolls.\""; close; } 001-1,57,106,0|script|RIP#7|400 { mes "~ George ~"; - mes "Eaten by Snakes."; + mes "\"Eaten by snakes.\""; close; } 001-1,58,106,0|script|RIP#8|400 { mes "~ Kieron ~"; - mes "He was right, monsters were in the cave."; + mes "\"He was right; monsters were in the cave.\""; close; } 001-1,59,106,0|script|RIP#9|400 { mes "~ William ~"; - mes "Kieron was definitely right."; + mes "\"Kieron was definitely right.\""; close; } 001-1,60,106,0|script|RIP#10|400 { mes "~ Tyer ~"; - mes "An experiement went wrong."; + mes "\"An experiement went wrong.\""; close; } -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50