From 5fb61b03b577161e35df12fde4afc381a0edd0db Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: TheKandiman Date: Wed, 26 Jan 2011 23:26:57 -0500 Subject: Spelling and grammar updates in NPC dialog for maps 018 to 032 --- npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt | 30 +++++++++++++++--------------- 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/032-1_Outback') diff --git a/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt b/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt index 858a5088..a469ae36 100644 --- a/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt +++ b/npc/032-1_Outback/miriam.txt @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ L_intro: mes "[Miriam]"; mes "\"Yes, I am. Why? Do you think I am not OK? I am OK. You interrupted my meditation. Now I will need hours to calm down and stay quiet! Yes, yes, I know, I'm a fast talker!\""; next; - mes "\"In fact, I am fast in everything I do! I can kill a Mountain Snake before it even starts to think about atacking me! Yes my friend, in a battle, speed is power!"; + mes "\"In fact, I am fast in everything I do! I can kill a Mountain Snake before it even starts to think about attacking me! Yes my friend, in a battle, speed is power!"; next; menu "Wow! Very impressi...",-; @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ L_canthelp2: next; mes "\"...\""; next; - mes "\"Well, if you don't have time to help, at least don't make things difficult to me!\""; + mes "\"Well, if you don't have time to help, at least don't make things difficult for me!\""; close; L_ask1: @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ L_ask1: next; menu "Yes, I will get what you want!",-, - "No, I have not time right now.",L_canthelp2; + "No, I have no time right now.",L_canthelp2; set QUEST_MIRIAM, 2; mes "\"Good. So, run and get it!\""; close; @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ L_ask3: mes "[Miriam]"; mes "\"You have a small mind, haven't you? I am meditating here and I asked you to bring me stuff, so I can concentrate better.\""; next; - mes "\"And stop asking so silly questions in the future.\""; + mes "\"And stop asking such silly questions in the future.\""; next; mes "\"So, if you really want to help me now, bring me 5 [Concentration Potions] and 10 [Snake Tongues].\""; close; @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ L_notenough: L_teach: mes "[Miriam]"; - mes "\"Hmm... do you think you can learn the special speed skill?\""; + mes "\"Hmm... do you think you can learn the special Speed skill?\""; next; menu "Yes, I am prepared...", -, @@ -155,19 +155,19 @@ L_teach: L_heavyweight: mes "[Miriam]"; - mes "\"Wow... Why do you bring so many things with you? You must be carrying more than one third of your own weight! I wont teach you unless you get rid of some stuff... \""; + mes "\"Wow... Why do you bring so many things with you? You must be carrying more than one third of your own weight! I won't teach you unless you get rid of some stuff... \""; close; L_heavymetal: mes "[Miriam]"; - mes "\"Hmm... I see... You want to be one of those lazy slow warriors... wasting all their strenght carrying kilos of metal clothes... Why no one sees the great advantages of a beautiful, flexible, lightweight armor nowadays?\""; + mes "\"Hmm... I see... You want to be one of those lazy slow warriors... wasting all their strength carrying kilos of metal clothes... Why does no one see the great advantages of a beautiful, flexible, lightweight armor nowadays?\""; next; mes "\"Come back here when you get rid of this junk...\""; close; L_slow: mes "[Miriam]"; - mes "Oh, wait, wait... " +@agi+ " Agility? Are you serious? What do you do with all your Character points? Put them all to 'Strenght'? Really... I dont even want to know... Come back here when you have a decent character points distribution!\""; + mes "Oh, wait, wait... " +@agi+ " Agility? Are you serious? What do you do with all your Character points? Put them all to 'Strength'? Really... I don't even want to know... Come back here when you have a decent character points distribution!\""; close; L_lowlevel: @@ -177,14 +177,14 @@ L_lowlevel: L_offer: mes "[Miriam]"; - mes "\"Hmm! You look great on these clothes! They look very comfortable too... And it seems like you are not carrying too much weight.\""; + mes "\"Hmm! You look great in these clothes! They look very comfortable too... And it seems like you are not carrying too much weight.\""; next; if (!(getskilllv(SKILL_POOL))) goto L_noskill; menu - "Yes, I look really good on this " +@torso$+ ".",-; + "Yes, I look really good in this " +@torso$+ ".",-; next; mes "[Miriam]"; - mes "\"I see. I like the way you distributed your Character Points too... " +@agi+ " points to Agility! You really know how to prepare yourself to a good fight!\""; + mes "\"I see. I like the way you distributed your Character Points too... " +@agi+ " points to Agility! You really know how to prepare yourself for a good fight!\""; next; mes "\"Well... Even if you have a potential to be a good fighter, moving the way you do will not help. You need to be fast to avoid the monsters. \""; next; @@ -192,14 +192,14 @@ L_offer: next; menu "I'm in! What kind of test is it?",-, - "I dont think I need more speed right now",L_giveup; + "I don't think I need more speed right now",L_giveup; next; L_test: mes "[Miriam]"; - mes "\"Great! The test is simple. You need to run as fast as you can from the place where I am sitting to the mountains and talk to Pachua, the chief. When you get there and talk to Pachua, he will send a special smoke signal to me, so I can know how much time it took for you to go there.\""; + mes "\"Great! The test is simple. You need to run as fast as you can from the place where I am sitting to the mountains and talk to Pachua, the chief. When you get there and talk to Pachua, he will send a special smoke signal to me, so I can know how much time it took for you to get there.\""; next; - mes "\"If you make it in a good time, I will teach you the special speeding skill, if not, you can always try again. So, are you ready?\""; + mes "\"If you make it in a good time, I will teach you the special speeding skill. If not, you can always try again. So, are you ready?\""; next; menu "Yes, let's do it!",-, @@ -232,7 +232,7 @@ L_noskill: L_giveup: mes "[Miriam]"; - mes "\"Oh, that is bad... But if you change your mind, come back!\""; + mes "\"Oh, that is too bad... But if you change your mind, come back!\""; set QUEST_MIRIAM, 4; close; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50