From 17772eb241e2638eac7ea4f324ace1ae23555756 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: TheKandiman Date: Sat, 12 Feb 2011 11:23:23 -0500 Subject: Spelling, grammar, formatting corrections for love triangle quest. --- npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt | 44 ++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt') diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt index 194c010a..cefbf61d 100644 --- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt +++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ L_Skip1: L_Offer_Help1: mes "\"I.. I don't know you. Why should you help me?\""; next; - mes "\"Bring me a proof you are serious. My life seems to have ended in a terrible and sad way, I can feel it very clearly. If you want to help me, please bring me something that represents this immeasurable sadness I am feeling!\""; + mes "\"Bring me proof that you are serious. My life seems to have ended in a terrible and sad way, I can see it very clearly. If you want to help me, please bring me something that represents this immeasurable sadness I am feeling!\""; set @state, 3; callsub S_Update_Mask; @@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ L_Check_Tears: callsub S_Update_Mask; mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"These tears.. how they shimmer in the candle light. Yes, it seems you are serious about your offer. I think you have the sensibility to help me find out the real meaning of this terrible feeling.\""; + mes "\"These tears.. how they shimmer in the candle light. Yes, it seems you are serious about your offer. I think you have the sensibility to help me find out the real meaning behind this terrible feeling.\""; next; L_Ask_Life: mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; @@ -175,20 +175,20 @@ L_Ask_Life: if (@kidstate == 5) menu - "Please tell me about your life. Maybe this gives a clue what happened.",L_Skip2, + "Please tell me about your life. Maybe this will give a clue about what happened.",L_Skip2, "Hi. I found this in the main hall. Do you know to whom it belongs?", L_Bracelet, "I need to think about that.", L_Close; L_Skip2: menu - "Please tell me about your life. Maybe this gives a clue what happened.",-, + "Please tell me about your life. Maybe this will give a clue about what happened.",-, "I need to think about that.", L_Close; mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"About my life? Well ok.\""; + mes "\"About my life? Well, ok.\""; next; mes "\"I'm the owner of this inn. I inherited it from my parents, who ran it while I was a child.\""; next; - mes "\"My father - he was a very joyful man. But one day, I was just ten years old, he had an accident while carrying a barrel of beer.\""; + mes "\"My father - he was a very joyful man. But one day, when I was just ten years old, he had an accident while carrying a barrel of beer.\""; next; mes "\"The barrel smashed his legs and he wasn't able to walk anymore. He got very despondent about that and started to drink.\""; next; @@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ L_Skip2: "Yes, yes, but what about your life shortly before you died?",-, "I can imagine. I'm very sorry for you",-; - mes "She doesn't seem to pay much attention on what you say."; + mes "She doesn't seem to pay much attention to what you say."; next; mes "\"But Hamond, my friend since I was a child, helped me in those bad times. We built up the inn again and we - we married.\""; next; @@ -227,14 +227,14 @@ L_Check_Kid: if ((Sex == 1) && (@kidstate < 7)) goto L_Man; if ((Sex == 0) && (@kidstate < 7)) goto L_Woman; - mes "\"What I'm going to tell you is very personal, but your acts showed me you're a person I can trust. You kindly asked me about that bracelet you have found... and also, even my son, who is always so reserved with strangers, came to me and spent a long time telling me a lot of nice things about you. So I will tell you about my sad love.\""; + mes "\"What I'm going to tell you is very personal, but your acts have shown me that you're a person I can trust. You kindly asked me about that bracelet you have found... and also, even my son, who is always so reserved with strangers, came to me and spent a long time telling me a lot of nice things about you. So I will tell you about my sad love.\""; next; L_Lovestory: mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"It began as a completely normal day. We were taking care of our overnight guests and prepared the inn for the evening rush.\""; + mes "\"It began as a completely normal day. We were taking care of our overnight guests and preparing the inn for the evening rush.\""; next; - mes "\"But that day, a very special patron checked in. His name was Savaric, and he was a student of magic. He came from far away to check some rumours about a legendary mana seed.\""; + mes "\"But that day, a very special patron checked in. His name was Savaric, and he was a student of magic. He came from far away to check some rumors about a legendary mana seed.\""; next; mes "Reid's Ghost has a completely enchanted look on her face."; next; @@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ L_Lovestory: mes "She is pointing at her dead body with a sad look on her face. You take the key."; next; mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"This is the key to our personal room, it is located at the very end of the corridor upstairs. You will find my dairy in the bookshelf, hidden behind a book with poems. Hamond don't like poems.\""; + mes "\"This is the key to our personal room, it is located at the very end of the corridor upstairs. You will find my diary in the bookshelf, hidden behind a book with poems. Hamond doesn't like poems.\""; next; mes "\"Please go and read it.\""; @@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ L_Lovestory: L_Read_Diary: mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"Please go in my room and read the diary. You will find my dairy in the bookshelf, hidden behind a book with poems.\""; + mes "\"Please go into my room and read the diary. You will find my diary in the bookshelf, hidden behind a book with poems.\""; close; L_Savaric: @@ -276,19 +276,19 @@ L_Savaric: mes "\"Oh, thank you.\""; if (@golbanez < 5) menu - "But I still didn't find out, what happened. I'll return when I have news.",L_Close; + "But I still didn't find out what happened. I'll return when I have news.",L_Close; menu - "But I still didn't find out, what happened. I'll return when I have news.",L_Close, + "But I still didn't find out what happened. I'll return when I have news.",L_Close, "I found out what happened to you and this place. I'll tell you.",-; - mes "You explain her about Golbanez, Savaric and the memories you have seen."; + mes "You explain to her about Golbanez, Savaric and the memories you have seen."; next; mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"Oh, I always knew we weren't doing the right thing! But how should we have known it would end like this?\""; + mes "\"Oh, I always knew we weren't doing the right thing! But how could we have known it would end like this?\""; next; - mes "\"I would never have expected Hamond to beat me - and Savaric... I trusted him with my life... And he uncarefully wasted it. Mine and that from everyone else in the inn.\""; + mes "\"I would never have expected Hamond to beat me - and Savaric... I trusted him with my life... And he carelessly wasted it. Mine and everyone else in the inn.\""; next; - mes "\"I'm feeling hurt. And confused. Both Hamond and Savaric turned out not to be the person I believed them to be.\""; + mes "\"I'm feeling hurt. And confused. Both Hamond and Savaric turned out not to be the persons I believed them to be.\""; set @state, 8; callsub S_Update_Mask; close; @@ -343,12 +343,12 @@ L_Kidding: L_Tease: mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"Don't be mean! I never feeled like that before.\""; + mes "\"Don't be mean! I never felt like that before.\""; close; L_Thanks: mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"I'm so glad, now I know what happened and spoke to Savaric and Hamond. Thank you so much. Please take this.\""; + mes "\"I'm so glad, now I know what happened and spoke to both Savaric and Hamond. Thank you so much. Please take this.\""; getinventorylist; if (@inventorylist_count == 100) goto L_Full_Inv; getitem "MylarinDust", 1; @@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ L_Happy: mes "\"Thank you for all you've done.\""; menu "Can you tell me again about the powder you gave me?",L_Mylarin, - "I'm glad I could helped.",-; + "I'm glad I could help.",-; close; L_Not_Enough_Tears: @@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ L_Man: L_Woman: mes "[Reid's Ghost]"; - mes "\"What I have to tell you something very personal. You are a woman like me - I'm sure you would understand.\""; + mes "\"What I have to tell you is something very personal. You are a woman like me - I'm sure you would understand.\""; next; mes "\"But I'm not sure if I want to tell you. I know you helped me already and showed me you are a sensitive woman, but I barely know you. I am sorry, but I have to think a little bit more. Maybe later, when I know you better, I can tell you more about it. \""; close; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2