From 169d526873715c7ba2a5afd99170922d00d76221 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Ben Longbons Date: Tue, 27 Mar 2012 13:02:19 -0700 Subject: Check that news entry for spelling, grammar, and canonicity. --- world/map/news.txt | 11 ++++++----- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/world/map/news.txt b/world/map/news.txt index c29bec6f..c2ce3506 100644 --- a/world/map/news.txt +++ b/world/map/news.txt @@ -1,12 +1,13 @@ ##3 March 2012 ##0 -##0 Two announcments to make: +##0 Two announcements to make: ##0 -##0 It seems Tulimshar finally recovers from the impacts +##0 It seems Tulimshar is finally recovering from the impacts ##0 of the great earthquake. -##0 The city became much more lively, children playing between the houses, -##0 farmers go back on their fields and increased trade activity -##0 has been reported. +##0 Although the eastern half of the city is still closed, +##0 it has become much more lively, with children playing between the houses, +##0 farmers going back to their fields, reports of increased trade activity. +##0 ##0 Surely there are lots of tasks for a young adventurer! ##0 ##0 Near Hurnscald a bunny showed up that looks like an older version -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2