From 31b5fe9014044f9978a8bceb0ae3c15b7b92b6b1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Maarten Vanraes Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2012 21:35:46 +0100 Subject: Fix english translation --- npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt | 10 +++++----- npc/000-2-0/julia.txt | 14 +++++++------- npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt | 8 ++++---- 3 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc') diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt b/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt index 9d53cf8f..000c32b0 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ mesn; mesq lg("NO and *hick* NO, you and you and your... *burp* stupi*hick* guild!"); - mesq l("You tried to get ride of me, eeh?? But suprise! I'm still here...*hick* Or there...."); + mesq l("You tried to get rid of me, eeh?? But suprise! I'm still here...*hick* Or there...."); next; mesn; @@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ menu l("What are you talking about? Which guild?"), l_Quit, - l("You are full of wine my friend..."), -, + l("You are full of wine, my friend..."), -, l("You should go and get some sleep."), l_Quit; mesn; - mesq l("If I saw *hick* who you wereee.... *hips* Would not had helped you! "); + mesq l("If I saw *hick* who you wereee.... *hips* Would not have helped you! "); menu l("But who am I?"), -, @@ -71,8 +71,8 @@ l_Quit: mesq l("Yeah you're all like *hick* that in Esperia, but you won't get me! *burp*"); mesq l("I'm not that numb eeh *hick* what did ever you disco*hips*veeered there, the warrior guild won't get me!"); next; - mesn l("The sailor is turning his back to you"); + mesn l("The sailor is turning his back to you."); close; -} \ No newline at end of file +} diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt index 3ff1e035..8dc64eba 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt @@ -34,9 +34,9 @@ mesn; mesq l("Hi, nice to see you!"); next; - mesq l("I'm called Julia, it's me who took care of you during some days, when we found you back on the sea, I'm very happy to see that you seem okay now!"); + mesq l("I'm called Julia, it's me who took care of you some days ago, when we found you back on the sea, I'm very happy to see that you seem okay now!"); next; - mesq l("Could I ask you which is your native language? A sailor said me russian, an other one said me french... I'm a bit lost. I will register you on the ship board list just after that."); + mesq l("Could I ask you what your native language is? A sailor told me you're russian, but another one told me you're french... I'm a bit lost. I will register you on the ship boarding list just after that."); set @s$, ""; goto l_ChooseLang; @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ if (@lang < 0 || @lang > 7) close; setlang @lang; mesn; - mesq l("Ok, Done. I'm sure that you got some question for me, feel free to ask them!"); + mesq l("Ok, Done. I'm sure that you've got some questions for me, feel free to ask them!"); goto l_Menu; close; @@ -88,17 +88,17 @@ l_What: mesn; - mesq l("We thought that you could help us understand this, all we know is that we found you back on the sea, adrifting one your raft."); + mesq l("We thought that you could help us understand this, all we know is that we found you back in the sea, adrift on your raft."); next; - mesq l("You were in a bad mood and you can be happy that we found you before the sea took you."); + mesq l("You were in a bad mood and you should be happy that we found you before the sea took you."); next; - mesq l("Also, there was this inscription on your raft, the one of the warrior guild of Esperia, the largest and biggest guild of the whole new world, does it make you remember something?"); + mesq l("Also, there was this inscription on your raft, one of the warrior guild of Esperia, the largest and biggest guild of the whole new world, does that make you remember something?"); next; goto l_EsperiaMenu; l_EsperiaMenu: menu - l("Sorry but I can't tell you anything about it."), l_NoChanges, + l("Sorry but I can't tell you anything about that."), l_NoChanges, l("Nothing, sorry."), l_NoChanges; l_Close: diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt b/npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt index 68b9dbda..62e95fbc 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-1/arpan.txt @@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ OnTalk: set @q, geta2(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Arpan); mesn; if (@q > 0) goto l_Menu; - mes lg("Yeye, you are really lucky to be alive. You are in good enough shape for walking do you remember what happened?"); + mes lg("Yeye, you are really lucky to be alive. You are in good enough shape for walking, do you remember what happened?"); seta2 ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Arpan, 1; menu lg("I only remember I was rescued by you."), l_Story, @@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ OnEquip: close; l_OhWell: - mes lg("Oh well, we rescued you when you were yaying adrift on sea."); + mes lg("Oh well, we rescued you when you were yaying adrift in the sea."); l_Story: mes lg("You were yaying sleeping for quite some days there, our shipkeeper, Julia, was here with you, she did her best to fix your injuries during this time."); @@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ l_Menu: lg("Could you tell me where I am?"), l_Where, lg("Where can I find Julia?"), l_Julia, l("Who are you?"), l_Who, - rif(geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_ArpanMoney) == 0, l("Where are my old cloths?")), l_WhereOldClothes, + rif(geta(ShipQuests, ShipQuests_ArpanMoney) == 0, l("Where are my old clothes?")), l_WhereOldClothes, rif(!@equipped, lg("What should I add after taking these clothes?")), l_WhatCloth, rif(!@equipped, l("Thank you, I'll take them."), l("Nothing, sorry.")), l_Quit; close; @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ l_Julia: mes g(l("She is on the upper level, yeye can't miss her. She is the only girl in this crew, oh well, except for you now yeyeye!"), l("She is on the upper level, yeye can't miss her. She is the only girl in this crew.")); next; - mes lg("You can go to your right to go on this upper level."); + mes lg("You can go to your right to go to the upper level."); next; goto l_Menu; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2 From e726cbe22d5337ae628900dad3d57aac21b62a72 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Maarten Vanraes Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2012 22:26:09 +0100 Subject: remove extra space --- npc/000-2-0/julia.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'npc') diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt index 8dc64eba..db066777 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ mesn; mesq l("You are actually on a ship, we're on our way to the commercial capital of Artis. "); next; - mesq l("We should be there in a few days, and once we arrive, I will advertise the warrior guild of what happened, I'm sure that they can help you. "); + mesq l("We should be there in a few days, and once we arrive, I will advertise the warrior guild of what happened, I'm sure that they can help you."); next; mesq l("But until then, you need to stay here, there is nothing else to do anyway."); next; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2 From c60c5c70e3c985bcce2777d3564665ed77c486f1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Maarten Vanraes Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2012 22:42:09 +0100 Subject: Remove extra space --- npc/000-2-0/julia.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'npc') diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt index db066777..c151094e 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ l_WhereIam: mesn; - mesq l("You are actually on a ship, we're on our way to the commercial capital of Artis. "); + mesq l("You are actually on a ship, we're on our way to the commercial capital of Artis."); next; mesq l("We should be there in a few days, and once we arrive, I will advertise the warrior guild of what happened, I'm sure that they can help you."); next; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2 From 1d13411601b4f70db80a15e4e7c721b6a3af79a1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Maarten Vanraes Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2012 23:37:56 +0100 Subject: remove extra space --- npc/000-2-1/alige.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'npc') diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/alige.txt b/npc/000-2-1/alige.txt index 6b65a932..8405ef66 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-1/alige.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-1/alige.txt @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ l_NeedHelp: mesn l("Hidden person"); - mesq l("Good, good! ") + " " + l("Could you help me please? ") + " " + l("I beg you, please, pleeeease... "); + mesq l("Good, good! ") + " " + l("Could you help me please? ") + " " + l("I beg you, please, pleeeease..."); menu l("Why not... but, who are you?") + " " + l("And what kind of help do you need?"), l_CanHelp; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2 From a612b9e5567e701d8c99c1ba5f621250e8ec4412 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Maarten Vanraes Date: Thu, 12 Jan 2012 23:38:51 +0100 Subject: fix surprise --- npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'npc') diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt b/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt index 000c32b0..3fedc1c1 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/billybons.txt @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ mesn; mesq lg("NO and *hick* NO, you and you and your... *burp* stupi*hick* guild!"); - mesq l("You tried to get rid of me, eeh?? But suprise! I'm still here...*hick* Or there...."); + mesq l("You tried to get rid of me, eeh?? But surprise! I'm still here...*hick* Or there...."); next; mesn; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2