From 22618254b04994f0abe7bd56514113d9db330b82 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr>
Date: Tue, 20 Nov 2012 07:45:05 +0400
Subject: Major typo fix in both new scripts.

---
 npc/000-1/ale.txt   | 14 +++++++-------
 npc/000-1/tibbo.txt | 14 +++++++-------
 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

(limited to 'npc')

diff --git a/npc/000-1/ale.txt b/npc/000-1/ale.txt
index de568370..1810c8f8 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/ale.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/ale.txt
@@ -11,20 +11,20 @@
     if (@q == 1) goto l_CallFunc;
 
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Don't you see I am working here?!");
+    mesq l("Can't you see I'm working?!");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Well I'm working too! Do you want me to carry one of those boxes back to Gugli?"), -;
+        l("Well I'm working too! Don't you want me to carry one of those boxes back to Gugli?"), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Ooh...So now it seems sailors are not able to do their job anymore!");
+    mesq l("Ooh... It seems sailors are not able to do their job anymore?!");
     next;
     
     menu
         l("Fine! Goodbye."), l_Close;
-        l("Yes, it is true! You are not able at all. Nard has been waited the food for too long. Hurry up lazy sailors!"), -;
+        l("Yes, it is true! You are not able at all. Nard has been waiting for the food for too long already. Hurry up, you lazy sailors!"), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Well then...Here it is!");
+    mesq l("Well then... Take this one!");
     next;
     
     setq ShipQuests_Ale, 1;
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ l_CallFunc:
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Who are you searching?");
+    mesq l("Who are you looking for?");
     next;
 
     menu
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ l_CallFunc:
 l_Bottom:
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("I've seen him on the bottom of the island, ask Jalad for more info.");
+    mesq l("I've seen him on the bottom of the island, ask Jalad for more information.");
 
     close;
 
diff --git a/npc/000-1/tibbo.txt b/npc/000-1/tibbo.txt
index 9e65d1e3..a51f6fe7 100644
--- a/npc/000-1/tibbo.txt
+++ b/npc/000-1/tibbo.txt
@@ -15,23 +15,23 @@
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Fine...I was just going to give you some help..."), -;
+        l("Fine... I was just going to give you some help..."), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Hel...What?! Wait!");
+    mesq l("Hel... What?! Wait!");
     next;
-    mesq l("W-What kind of help?");
+    mesq l("What kind of help?");
     next;
 
     menu
-        l("Gugli asked me to help you carrying one of those boxes you are filling."), -;
+        l("Gugli asked me to help you carrying one of these box you are filling."), -;
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Well then it seems I have to apologize.");
+    mesq l("Then it seems I have to apologize.");
     next;
-    mesq l("I am surprised someone has been sent here for help. It's quite...unusual.");
+    mesq l("I am surprised someone has been sent here for help. It is quite... unusual.");
     next;
     mesq l("Bring this box back to Gugli. He will be more than happy!");
     next;
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Thank you and be carefull with that box. I have worked so hard to fill it.");
+    mesq l("Thank you and be careful with that box. I have worked really hard to fill it!");
     close;
 
 l_CallFunc:
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