From bfdad615a0d290a9207e76c631ac217d57c274b0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Unverified Date: Sun, 6 Mar 2016 14:17:10 -0500 Subject: Revert "Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes and reworded some dialogue for clarity." This reverts commit a1cfd4e6afff78f777872f49f8e8faacbe6f2e60. --- npc/001-2-27/don.txt | 18 +++++++++--------- npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/001-2-27') diff --git a/npc/001-2-27/don.txt b/npc/001-2-27/don.txt index fddde8a5..17c50eee 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-27/don.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-27/don.txt @@ -17,12 +17,12 @@ function card_explanation { speech 5, l("There are two different kinds of card, the first changes the style of your clothes, the second changes their stats."), - l("I am not an expert of the first kind, but I know what I am talking about when it comes to improving equipment"), + l("I am not an expert of the first kind, but I know what I am talking about for the second."), l("A stat card works on different pieces of equipment."), - l("Each piece of equipment has a predefined slot number."), - l("Each card improves your gear by a ratio or a fixed number on a predefined stat."), - l("Like, a defensive mythril card can be used on any mythril equipment, and it will improve the defense by 5% of the latter."), - l("You just have to select the card, then you choose which piece of equipment you want to use it on, and you are done."); + l("Each equipment has a predefined slot number."), + l("Each cards improve your gear by a ratio or a fixed number on a predefined stat."), + l("Like, a defensive mythril card can be used on any mythril equipment, and it will improve of 5% the defense of the latter."), + l("You just have to select it, you choose on which piece of equipment you want to use it, and you are done."); return; } @@ -34,16 +34,16 @@ select (l("What about Chelios?")); speech 5, - l("Chelios was stubborn in his youth, he never stopped annoying me with his questions while I was working at the forge."), + l("Chelios was stubborn in his youth, he could not stop to annoy me with his questions while I was working at the forge."), l("He did not change while growing up, I repeatedly asked him to leave the forge but in the end he installed himself in front of it..."), - l("He is mature and he rarely ask questions so I am fine. I can not stand the sight of a whiner anyway."); + l("He is mature and he rarely ask questions so I am fine. I can not stand the sight of a whinger anyway."); return; } function good_blacksmith { speech 5, - l("I do not like to brag about it but you won't find a better blacksmith on the whole island."), - l("If you need somebody to craft a weapon or a plate from diagrams I am the one that you need."); + l("I do not like to brag about it but you will not find any better blacksmith on the whole island."), + l("If you need somebody to craft a weapon or a plate from a diagrams I am the one that you need."); switch (select (l("Can I craft them myself?"), l("Ok."))) diff --git a/npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt b/npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt index c447f7e3..641fd93b 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-27/kaylo.txt @@ -22,11 +22,11 @@ speech 5, l("I used a card to improve my clothes."), l("There're two different kinds of card, the first changes the style of your clothes, the second changes their stats."), - l("You should discuss with Don and Calypsan if you want to learn more about it, they are masters on this area!"); + l("You should discuss with Don and Calypsan if you want to learn more about it, they are master on this area!"); break; case 3: speech 5, - l("You are in the Blacksmith's house, by Jove!"), + l("You are on the Blacksmith's house, by Jove!"), l("Don is a renowned blacksmith throughout Andorra it's crazy that you don't know about him."); break; case 4: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50