From f7724f3d5b2cddb69dfd605b46d625528c5f6071 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Unverified Date: Sun, 6 Mar 2016 14:35:17 -0500 Subject: Fixed a lot of grammar mistakes and changed some dialogue for clarity. --- npc/001-2-21/julia.txt | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/001-2-21') diff --git a/npc/001-2-21/julia.txt b/npc/001-2-21/julia.txt index abb1b63f..1296b097 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-21/julia.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-21/julia.txt @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ L_Menu: l("Is it possible to go back to the island?"), L_Island, l("Could you explain to me where I am?"), L_WhereIam, l("What happened to me?"), L_What, - l("Can I read these rules again?"), L_Rules, + l("Can I read the rules again?"), L_Rules, l("Nothing, sorry."), L_Quit; L_YNMenu: @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ L_What: L_Rules: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Of course, they are on the left wall, go have a look at them."); + mesq l("Of course, they are on the left wall. Go have a look at them."); next; mesq l("Do you have any other questions for me?"); next; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50