From 5a4bb28f745e8d0a8e11cf8be6e3b1d76c772c4a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alige Date: Sun, 17 Jul 2016 20:29:33 +0200 Subject: Continued fixing typos and rewording sentences, after reading the translations. --- npc/001-1/chelios.txt | 7 ++++--- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/001-1/chelios.txt') diff --git a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt index c87e05f6..1cebfdc7 100644 --- a/npc/001-1/chelios.txt +++ b/npc/001-1/chelios.txt @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ speech 5, l("Thank you very much!"), - l("Talk with Lloyd the banker in the Merchant Guild, it's a big building at the northern part of Artis, atop the little hill."); + l("Talk with Lloyd the Banker in the Merchant Guild, it's a big building at the northern part of Artis, at the top of the small hill."); setq ArtisQuests_Enora, 2; @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ speech 5, l("It's the big building at northern Artis, at the top of a small hill."), l("Take the east road that goes to the north and follow it until you are on top of the cliff."), - l("That part of the town is called the gilded hill, and where the Merchant Guild has its headquarters."), //rich hill + l("That part of the town is called the gilded hill, it's also where the Merchant Guild has its headquarters."), //rich hill l("Lloyd still owes me, but beware of those money-grubbers, or they will sell your own teeth to you!"); return; @@ -69,7 +69,8 @@ function blacksmith_house{ speech 5, l("Behind me? It's the Blacksmith house, the most renowned throughout Andorra."), - l("There are two shops inside, they are independent from the Merchant Guild of Artis; now that I think about it, they are the only shops that are independent in Artis..."), + l("There are two shops inside, they are independent from the Merchant Guild of Artis."), + l("Now that I think about it, they are the only shops that are independent in Artis..."), l("...this might be because of Don, he is the master blacksmith of this place and a model to me!"); return; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2