From b4de3f0dc752e4c526a57c7dd0be79ea23e55771 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alige Date: Tue, 11 Feb 2014 11:13:07 +0400 Subject: English fixes done Qwerty Dragon. --- npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt | 13 +++++++------ 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt') diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt b/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt index 10c7b40f..99f1717c 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/sailors.txt @@ -1,6 +1,7 @@ // Evol scripts. // Authors: // Ablu +// Qwerty Dragon // Reid // Description: // End of introduction with Nard and Elmo talking about the player. @@ -19,8 +20,8 @@ OnTouch: setcamnpc "Nard"; mesn "Captain Nard"; - mesq g(l("I see. Warn the other sailors about this. But if she's part of the Warrior Guild, then she's also our ally."), - l("I see. Warn the other sailors about this. But if he's part of the Warrior Guild, then he's also our ally.")); + mesq g(l("I see. Warn the other sailors about this. But if she's part of the Warrior Guild, then she's also our freind and ally."), + l("I see. Warn the other sailors about this. But if he's part of the Warrior Guild, then he's also our freind and ally.")); next; setcamnpc "Elmo"; @@ -34,12 +35,12 @@ OnTouch: setcamnpc "Nard"; mesn "Captain Nard"; - mesq g(l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on her."), - l("This kind of talk should be punished, but I agree that I don't specially like them too, so keep an eye on him.")); + mesq g(l("This kind of talk should be taken with a grain of salt, but I agree and admit that I too am skeptical, so keep an eye on her."), + l("This kind of talk should be taken with a grain of salt, but I agree and admit that I too am skeptical, so keep an eye on him.")); next; - mesq g(l("But... If she has amnesia like Julia said... We don't need to worry about her."), - l("But... If he has amnesia like Julia said... We don't need to worry about him.")); + mesq g(l("But... If she has amnesia like Julia said... We don't need to worry about her. At least not yet."), + l("But... If he has amnesia like Julia said... We don't need to worry about him. At least not yet.")); next; setcamnpc "Elmo"; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2