From 5a4bb28f745e8d0a8e11cf8be6e3b1d76c772c4a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alige Date: Sun, 17 Jul 2016 20:29:33 +0200 Subject: Continued fixing typos and rewording sentences, after reading the translations. --- npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt | 4 ++-- npc/000-2-1/peter.txt | 2 +- npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt | 2 +- 3 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/000-2-1') diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt b/npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt index 0b8d8ff4..247e58ac 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-1/chefgado.txt @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ L_Rude: setq ShipQuests_ChefGado, 1; mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Well done! Collect all the ingredients and then come back here. You will be rewarded, once I am satisfied that they understand who rules this ship!"); + mesq lg("Well done! Collect all the ingredients and then come back here. You will be rewarded once I am satisfied that they understand who rules this ship!"); next; mesq l("Before you go, let me tell you how to get @@s, because you don't look very smart.", getitemlink(HalfCroconut)); @@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ L_QuestAccepted: L_OpenCroconut: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Take a @@ and try opening it using something like a sharp knife! I doubt you'll succeed though, you're being so weak in all.", getitemlink(Croconut)); + mesq lg("Take a @@ and try opening it using something like a sharp knife. I doubt you'll succeed, you're being so weak in everything.", getitemlink(Croconut)); next; mesq l("Now move!"); diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt b/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt index 5dd3e400..c327f914 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-1/peter.txt @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ OnReturnFail: OnReturnWin: .@peter = getq(ShipQuests_Peter); mesn; - mesq l("Thanks again for helping me. Drats these rattos for infesting our fair vessal! They are a permanent problem; so you can always be sure that your help with the extermination, to keep their numbers under control, is very welcome indeed. But the situation is, that I can give you a reward only the one time."); + mesq l("Thanks again for helping me. Drats these rattos for infesting our fair vessal! They are a permanent problem so I will always need your help to exterminate them in order to keep their number under control. Your help is very welcome indeed. Unfortunately, I can give you a reward only for the first extermination."); next; if (.@peter == 3 || .@peter == 4) diff --git a/npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt b/npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt index a1512429..d293cfd1 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-1/savepoint.txt @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ OnClick: narrator 4, l("You lie in the bed."), l("Your head is suddently heavy, your eyes are closing..."), - l("You fell asleep."); + lg("You fell asleep."); warp "000-0-1", 26, 28; } -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2