From b4de3f0dc752e4c526a57c7dd0be79ea23e55771 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alige Date: Tue, 11 Feb 2014 11:13:07 +0400 Subject: English fixes done Qwerty Dragon. --- npc/000-1/sapartan.txt | 13 +++++++------ 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/000-1/sapartan.txt') diff --git a/npc/000-1/sapartan.txt b/npc/000-1/sapartan.txt index 5316273b..d13537bb 100644 --- a/npc/000-1/sapartan.txt +++ b/npc/000-1/sapartan.txt @@ -1,6 +1,7 @@ // Evol scripts. -// Author: +// Authors: // Hal9000 +// Qwerty Dragon // Description: // Friend of Max, he gives some information on combat system. @@ -13,7 +14,7 @@ mesn "Max"; mesq lg("@@? Welcome my dear!", strcharinfo(0)); next; - mesq lg("Last time I saw you, you were lost in the sea on your raft."); + mesq lg("Last time I saw you, you were lost at sea on your raft."); next; restorecam; @@ -49,7 +50,7 @@ mes ""; mesn; - mesq lg("Maybe... But I prefer having well-trained people around me when it comes to fight against dangerous creatures. Do you already feel expert on how you fight enemies?"); + mesq lg("Maybe... But I prefer having well-trained people around me when it comes to fighting against dangerous creatures. Do you already feel adept fighting enemies?"); next; menu @@ -59,13 +60,13 @@ mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Then I can give you some tips about fights."); + mesq l("Then I can give you some tips about fighting."); next; mesq l("The first thing you should do is to evaluate your enemy."); next; mesq l("You can easily see if a monster is easy to kill or just impossible to defeat. Do not try against creatures that are way more powerful than you... You'd be risking your life for nothing."); next; - mesq l("Secondly, choose wisely which weapon is suited for you. Some people like to face their enemies closely with a heavy axe, some others prefer to attack from a distance with a bow for example."); + mesq l("Secondly, choose wisely which weapon is suited for you. Some people like to face their enemies closely with a heavy axe, others prefer to attack from a distance with a bow for example."); next; menu @@ -73,7 +74,7 @@ mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("On one hand, ranged weapons are generally weaker than melee ones, but it obviously depends on the level of the weapon. On the other hand, you attack from a safer position."); + mesq l("On one hand, ranged weapons are generally weaker than melee ones, but you attack from a safer position. On the other hand, depending on the level of the weapon, melee ones potentially can yeild quicker kills."); next; mesq l("After choosing your weapon, you also need to know how to use it."); next; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2