From a2617447e1392517e36b8655e02166c37ccceb1d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alige Date: Tue, 28 Aug 2012 20:22:10 +0400 Subject: Added missing spaces at the end of some scripts. Removed some spare lines in some scripts. Reviewed language and punctuation in several scripts. --- npc/000-0-0/_import.txt | 2 +- npc/000-0-0/_mobs.txt | 2 -- npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt | 2 +- npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt | 18 +++++++++--------- 4 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/000-0-0') diff --git a/npc/000-0-0/_import.txt b/npc/000-0-0/_import.txt index 0aaee909..ea71b72f 100644 --- a/npc/000-0-0/_import.txt +++ b/npc/000-0-0/_import.txt @@ -3,4 +3,4 @@ npc: npc/000-0-0/_mobs.txt npc: npc/000-0-0/_warps.txt npc: npc/000-0-0/mapflags.txt npc: npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt -npc: npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt \ No newline at end of file +npc: npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt diff --git a/npc/000-0-0/_mobs.txt b/npc/000-0-0/_mobs.txt index f7bdafc1..569a14c8 100644 --- a/npc/000-0-0/_mobs.txt +++ b/npc/000-0-0/_mobs.txt @@ -1,7 +1,5 @@ // 000-0-0 mobs - - 000-0-0.gat,0,0,0 script Mob000-0-0 -1,{ end; } diff --git a/npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt b/npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt index e7743a63..87411f47 100644 --- a/npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt +++ b/npc/000-0-0/q'onan.txt @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ l_Zzz: close; l_Snoring: - mesq l("Rrrr pchhhh..."); + mesq l("Rrrr... Pchhhh..."); close; diff --git a/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt index 48497c3c..0d1076b0 100644 --- a/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt +++ b/npc/000-0-0/sailors.txt @@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ OnTalk: setcamnpc; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq g(l("This girl is lucky that we found her before a shark did. I have no idea where this came from. By the way, did you see the logo on her raft?"), - l("This guy is lucky that we found him before a shark did. I have no idea where this came from. By the way, did you see the logo on his raft?")); + mesq g(l("This girl is lucky we found her before a shark did. I have no idea where she comes from. By the way, did you see the logo on her raft?"), + l("This guy is lucky we found him before a shark did. I have no idea where he comes from. By the way, did you see the logo on his raft?")); next; mesn "Magic Arpan"; @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ OnTalk: next; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq l("It makes sense, do you think we should inform the capt'n about it?"); + mesq l("This makes sense. Do you think we should inform the capt'n about it?"); next; mesn "Magic Arpan"; @@ -35,8 +35,8 @@ OnTalk: next; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq g(l("Ok, I'm going to her room, keep an eye on her, we still don't know if she's an ally or an enemy..."), - l("Ok, I'm going to his room, keep an eye on him, we still don't know if he's an ally or an enemy...")); + mesq g(l("Alright, I'm going to her room, keep an eye on her, we still don't know if she's an ally or an enemy..."), + l("Alright, I'm going to his room, keep an eye on him, we still don't know if he's an ally or an enemy...")); next; mesn "Magic Arpan"; @@ -49,11 +49,11 @@ OnTalk: next; mesn "Magic Arpan"; - mesq l("Yayayaya, for the first time someone is dressed worse then us!"); + mesq l("Yayayaya, it's the first time someone is dressed worse then us!"); next; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq l("He he... Ok, I'm going to the upper level and inform the captain."); + mesq l("Hehe... Ok, I'm going to inform the captain up there."); next; mesn "Magic Arpan"; @@ -62,8 +62,8 @@ OnTalk: next; mesn "Elmo"; - mesq g(l("Ok, I think she's waking up, go see to her."), - l("Ok, I think he's waking up, go see to him.")); + mesq g(l("Ok, I think she's waking up, go see her."), + l("Ok, I think he's waking up, go see him.")); next; restorecam; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50