From ceac66a2f6dea5e68a7d1a750e86d75a50a7d6a5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Reid <reidyaro@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 15 Apr 2012 03:47:00 +0200
Subject: Correct english typo. (Pihro)
---
npc/000-2-3/nard.txt | 8 ++++----
npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt | 2 +-
npc/functions/savepoint.txt | 4 ++--
3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
index a21ee2b6..bc8dc53b 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/nard.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
000-2-3.gat,25,26,0,1 script Nard 306,{
mesn;
- mesq l("Hello, Let me just present myself, I'm Captain Nard, it's me who's leader of this ship.");
+ mesq l("Hello, Let me present myself, I'm Captain Nard, the leader of this ship.");
next;
mesn;
@@ -36,18 +36,18 @@ l_Menu:
l_Julia:
mesn;
- mesq l("You really have a bad amnesia.");
+ mesq l("You have extremely bad amnesia.");
next;
mesq l("She is the nurse and the shipkeeper of this ship, and also an excellent cook!");
next;
- mesq l("But more than everything, she is the one which took care of you when you were in coma.");
+ mesq l("But more than everything, she is the one who took care of you when you were in coma.");
close;
l_Ok:
mesn;
mesq l("Good to know. From what Darlin reported to me, we'll soon come accross a little island, before we arrive in Artis.");
next;
- mesq l("It'll be a good moment for you to do some exercice, as the ship is not very vast for that.");
+ mesq l("It'll be a good time for you to do some exercise, as the ship is not very vast for that.");
close;
}
diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt b/npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt
index a6a96f66..f3481503 100644
--- a/npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt
+++ b/npc/000-2-3/savepoint.txt
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
mes " ";
mesn "Narrator";
- mes col(l("You close your eyes some seconds..."), 9);
+ mes col(l("You close your eyes a few seconds..."), 9);
next;
mes col(l("..."), 9);
next;
diff --git a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
index ed3e0379..72c08910 100644
--- a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
+++ b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ function script SavePoint {
mes " ";
mesn "Narrator";
- mes col(l("You close your eyes some seconds..."), 9);
+ mes col(l("You close your eyes a few seconds..."), 9);
next;
mes col(l("..."), 9);
next;
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ function script SavePoint {
next;
mes col(l("..."), 9);
next;
- mes col(l("Your position get saved."), 9);
+ mes col(l("Your position is saved."), 9);
next;
savepoint @map$, @x, @y;
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