From b434cf3bb3cd295debb3f600e6410e629f190741 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alige Date: Tue, 5 Jun 2012 11:46:51 +0200 Subject: Fixed few dialogues in scripts and npc functions. --- npc/000-1/mickael.txt | 10 +++++----- npc/000-2-3/box.txt | 12 ++++++------ npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt | 4 ++-- npc/functions/clientversion.txt | 4 ++-- npc/functions/savepoint.txt | 6 +++--- 5 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt index cb3ca332..f9ebea04 100644 --- a/npc/000-1/mickael.txt +++ b/npc/000-1/mickael.txt @@ -11,20 +11,20 @@ next; mesq l("I hope that you don't mind that we used your raft to build this ramp."); next; - mesq l("We usually don't stop in such places, but Capt'ain let us stay here while he writes the location of this new island on his map!"); + mesq l("We usually don't stop in such places, but the capt'ain let us stay here while he writes the location of this new island on his map!"); next; mesq l("So we are looking for some new merchandise that we could trade at our next destination."); next; - mesq l("It's yours as well, right?"); + mesq l("That's where you go as well, right?"); next; menu l("That's right."), -, - l("Which one?"), l_Artis; + l("Where?"), l_Artis; mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("If you are looking for us there, mostly all of us will be at Pedro's restaurant and in the INN for Silvio's case..."); + mesq l("If you are looking for us there, mostly all of us will be at Pedro's restaurant and in the Inn for Silvio's case."); close; @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ l_Artis: mesn; mesq l("Artis of course!"); next; - mesq l("It's where every merchant ship ends their travelling, and we won't be the exception!"); + mesq l("It's where every merchant ship ends their travel and we won't be an exception."); close; diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/box.txt b/npc/000-2-3/box.txt index 33694b0b..1e0e984f 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/box.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/box.txt @@ -26,8 +26,8 @@ next; menu - l("Take a Bandana"), -, - l("Nothing"), l_Close; + l("Take a Bandana."), -, + l("Nothing."), l_Close; if (@q == 1) goto l_NotYet; if (@q == 2) goto l_Give; @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ mesn "Nard"; mesq l("You like these hats, right?"); next; - mesq l("How about I ask you to help the crew? It would mean that you're one of us, and that you will be able to get one of these hats."); + mesq l("How about I ask you to help the crew? It would mean that you're one of us and that you will be able to get one of these hats."); next; mesq l("We need as many hands as possible to explore the island out there, and to get some new food."); next; @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ mes ""; mesn "Nard"; - mesq l("Fine!"); + mesq l("Great!"); next; mesq l("Go outside and talk with Gugli, he will tell you what we need."); @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ l_Give: mesq l("Congrats!"); next; mesn "Nard"; - mesq l("You are now part of the crew! Thanks again for your help."); + mesq l("You are now part of the crew. Thanks again for your help."); seta2 ShipQuests, ShipQuests_Nardbox, 3; getitem "Bandana", 1; @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ l_Give: l_Already: mes ""; mesn "Nard"; - mesq l("You already took a Bandana, put this one back please."); + mesq l("You already took a Bandana, please put this one back in the box."); close; } \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt index 5c27d717..4a4231e8 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-3/elmo.txt @@ -10,9 +10,9 @@ if (@q == 1) goto l_GotMoney; mesn; - mesq l("Hey you, sorry for leaving your room so quickly, I needed to... speak with the Captain about... The reserve.. eh, you know, now that we got a new mouth in the crew we need to check it!"); + mesq l("Hey you, sorry for leaving your room so quickly, I needed to... speak with the captain about... The reserve. You know, now that we got a new mouth to feed, we need to check what we have."); next; - mesq l("So, how's it going? Did you meet any other crew members yet?"); + mesq l("So, how is it going? Did you meet any other crew members yet?"); next; menu diff --git a/npc/functions/clientversion.txt b/npc/functions/clientversion.txt index 828a0fd2..77003928 100644 --- a/npc/functions/clientversion.txt +++ b/npc/functions/clientversion.txt @@ -8,10 +8,10 @@ function script CheckClientVersion { if (getclientversion("") > 3) return; mes "Warning:"; mes "Warning:"; - mes "Warning: you using old client."; + mes "Warning: You are using an old client."; next; mes "Not all features will work."; next; - mes "Please install client from http://www.evolonline.org/"; + mes "Please install the new client from http://www.evolonline.org/"; next; } diff --git a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt index c1f2fc3f..2c1ab4f6 100644 --- a/npc/functions/savepoint.txt +++ b/npc/functions/savepoint.txt @@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ function script SavePoint { mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("There's a nice place to stay beside you."), 9); + mes col(l("There is a nice place to stay beside you."), 9); next; - mes col(l("What do you wish to do?"), 9); + mes col(l("What do you want to do?"), 9); next; menu @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ function script SavePoint { next; mes col("...", 9); next; - mes col(l("Your position is saved."), 9); + mes col(l("Your position has been saved."), 9); next; savepoint @map$, @x, @y; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2