From 645df06c3ee11d69d76713cbabdcd6eeb8dfe270 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alige Date: Sun, 10 Jul 2016 12:32:32 +0200 Subject: Fixed a bit of english in some scripts. --- npc/000-2-0/julia.txt | 1 - npc/001-2-2/moon.txt | 2 +- npc/001-2-6/leonard.txt | 4 ++-- 3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt index ad93bfad..3be81c53 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt @@ -73,7 +73,6 @@ L_First: goto L_ChooseLang; L_ChooseLang: - mes ""; mesn; mesq l("Of course! Tell me which language you speak and I will change the note on the ship board list."); diff --git a/npc/001-2-2/moon.txt b/npc/001-2-2/moon.txt index f0597f04..f79d9724 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-2/moon.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-2/moon.txt @@ -115,7 +115,7 @@ L_Story: mesq l("Please bring me @@s so I can pull out these spikes from my foot.", getitemlink("CrocClaw")); next; - switch (select(l("Stay here, I'll hurry back as soon as I get some."), + switch (select(l("Stay here, I will be back as soon as I have some."), l("Maybe next time."))) { case 1: diff --git a/npc/001-2-6/leonard.txt b/npc/001-2-6/leonard.txt index 3ae6cefe..18799a34 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-6/leonard.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-6/leonard.txt @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ { speech 1, l("You have put your finger on it, I am not."), - l("I grown up and lived a good while in the capital city, Esperia."), + l("I grew up and lived a good while in Esperia, the capital city."), l("This place is surrounded by two very important elements: academia and the arts. I was surrounded by theater, music, dance, museums..."), l("I had a great childhood in Esperia!"), l("It was wonderful."); @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ function miracle { - npctalkonce l("The miracle is this: the more we share the more we have."); + npctalkonce l("The miracle is this: the more we share, the more we have."); return; } -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50