From 3a2750afea7bdd9bbc52effeb865b68c3bd43203 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alige Date: Mon, 11 Jul 2016 14:42:54 +0200 Subject: English fixes in 001-2-22/note.txt. --- npc/001-2-22/note.txt | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/npc/001-2-22/note.txt b/npc/001-2-22/note.txt index 03e79769..3a4e2fa8 100644 --- a/npc/001-2-22/note.txt +++ b/npc/001-2-22/note.txt @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ // Evol scripts. -// Authors: +// Author: // Vasily_Makarov // Description: // @@ -11,23 +11,23 @@ mesq l("What do you want to do with it?"); menu - l("Read it"), L_Content, - l("Leave it"), -; + l("Read it."), L_Content, + l("Leave it."), -; close; L_Content: mesn; mes "\"" + l("Dear sister,"); - mes l("On the next days we will finally arrives at Artis"); + mes l("During the next few days, we will finally reach Artis."); next; - mes l("I will send you this letter directly when I arrive"); - mes l("Don't worry sister, I didn't forget you"); + mes l("I will send you this letter as soon as I arrive."); + mes l("Don't worry sister, I didn't forget you."); next; - mes l("I hope to come back home when the days are better"); - mes l("And when we have enough money to support ourselves and not depend on anybody"); + mes l("I would like to come back home when the days are better."); + mes l("And when we have enough money for ourselves without needing anybody else."); - mes l("Sincerely yours, Dan") + "\""; + mes l("Sincerely yours, Dan.") + "\""; close; } -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50