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author | Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr> | 2013-05-21 09:52:47 +0400 |
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committer | Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr> | 2013-05-21 09:52:47 +0400 |
commit | e1e4de3e8e215c114bda01cb25d46d357208f6fc (patch) | |
tree | 29b153b86e4d2c142bb182d676fb08a21bf13619 /npc/000-1 | |
parent | 0d83489825f9fb7539009b91426f70a50a19f6a8 (diff) | |
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Fixed issues and language in the cookie master script.
Diffstat (limited to 'npc/000-1')
-rw-r--r-- | npc/000-1/cookiemaster.txt | 70 |
1 files changed, 32 insertions, 38 deletions
diff --git a/npc/000-1/cookiemaster.txt b/npc/000-1/cookiemaster.txt index 38310b37..6bbfb5e6 100644 --- a/npc/000-1/cookiemaster.txt +++ b/npc/000-1/cookiemaster.txt @@ -22,6 +22,8 @@ next; mesq l("Don't tell me more, I know what you want... A cookie!"); next; + mesq l("Let me check my cookie list..."); + next; // Beta3 Contributors. if (strcharinfo(0) == "4144") @@ -35,13 +37,15 @@ if (strcharinfo(0) == "Socapex") goto l_Reward; - mesq l("I'm sorry... But my cookies are restricted to a certain type of people..."); + mesq l("I'm sorry but I can't see your name anywhere on my list. But my cookies are restricted to a certain type of people..."); + next; + mesq l("You see, my cookies are restricted to a certain type of people..."); next; menu - l("Are you really talking about... cookies?"), -, + l("Wait, are you really talking about... cookies?"), -, l("Your story seems..."), l_StorySeems, - l("That's not a place for a chef here."), l_Presentation; + l("That's not the place for a chef, what are you doing here?"), l_Presentation; mes ""; mesn; @@ -64,18 +68,19 @@ l_StorySeems: menu l("It's interesting and exciting at the same time!"), -, - l("It's quite far-fetched."), l_Kick; + l("Honestly, it's quite far-fetched according to me."), l_Kick; mes ""; menu + l("Too bad I'm not hungry enough right now for these... cookies. I'll maybe come back later."), l_Bye; l("How can I get one of these cookies?"), -; mes ""; mesn; mesq g(l("It looks like madam is curious, am I right?"), - l("It seems mister is curious, isn't he?")); + l("It seems mister is curious, are you not?")); next; - mesq l("If you want to be one of those who can ask for a cookie..."); + mesq l("Well, if you want to be one of those who can have a cookie..."); next; l_TaskExpanation: @@ -85,55 +90,44 @@ l_TaskExpanation: next; menu - l("So you're under the control of dictators, that's... reassuring..."), -, - l("Who're these friends?"), l_Friends; - - mes ""; - mesn; - mesq l("That's..."); - next; - mesq l("No wait, I didn't tell that, I..."); - next; - mesq l("If it's like thus, you won't have any cookie!"); - next; - - goto l_Kick; + l("So you're under the control of dictators, that's... reassuring."), l_Control, + l("Who are these friends?"), l_Friends; l_Friends: mes ""; mesn; mesq l("Shht shht!"); next; - mesq l("Don't say it too loud, some other people could hear it."); + mesq l("Don't say it too loud, other people could hear us."); next; - mesq l("They're... Well, you know, the creators..."); + mesq l("My friends are... Well, you know... The creators."); next; mesq l("I can't help you to be on my list, nor can I give you a cookie for free."); next; - mesq l("All of what I can do is to tell you this:"); + mesq l("All I can do is tell you that..."); next; - mesq l("If you see weird things, or things that shouldn't be here, or even things that you would like to see here..."); + mesq l("If you see weird things, or things that shouldn't be here, or even things that you would like to see there..."); next; - mesq l("Contact them, help them and be kind, and they might surely add you to my list!"); + mesq l("Simply contact them, help them and be kind. They might surely add you to my cookie list!"); next; mesn "Narrator"; - mes col(l("This Cookie Master reward people who contribute and develop to this world."), 9); + mes col(l("This Cookie Master rewards people who contribute and develop this world."), 9); next; mes col(l("If you want to be rewarded, help us to evolve in making this world a better place."), 9); next; - mes col(l("When you see something that look much like a bug than a feature, report it to http://bugs.evolonline.org or tries to explain this to a game contributor."), 9); + mes col(l("When you see something that looks more like a bug than a feature, report it on http://bugs.evolonline.org or try to contact a game contributor."), 9); next; - mes col(l("Any contribution to the game content (translation, graphics creation/edition, concept, coding/scripting, etc...) is also rewarded!"), 9); + mes col(l("Any contribution to the game content (translations, graphics creation/edition, concepts, coding/scripting, etc...) is rewarded!"), 9); close; l_Presentation: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("For a chief? Who said that I was a... Ah, yes, I am."); + mesq l("For a chef? Who said I was a... Oh right, I am."); next; - mesq l("I get send here with a task, I can give you a perfect, wonderful, magnificent, superbly well shaped... Cookie!"); + mesq l("I was sent here with a task. I can give you a perfect, wonderful, magnificent, superbly well shaped... Cookie!"); next; mesq l("But..."); next; @@ -141,11 +135,11 @@ l_Presentation: goto l_TaskExpanation; l_Reward: - mesq l("Ah! Yes, @@ is written on my cookie list...", strcharinfo(0)); + mesq l("Let me check... Yes! @@ is written on my cookie list...", strcharinfo(0)); next; - mesq l("That's surprise me a little, you don't look very helpful..."); + mesq l("That's quite surprising... You don't look very helpful."); next; - mesq l("Anyway, here you have your cookie."); + mesq l("Anyway, here, have a cookie!"); set @item, 517; set @count, 1; @@ -156,7 +150,7 @@ l_Reward: npctalk3 l("You receive a @@!", getitemlink("DeliciousCookie")); next; - mesq l("I'm sure that you'll enjoy the effect, but be prudent, these cookies are rare, and you'll need to help the community one more time before to get another one."); + mesq l("I'm sure you'll appreciate its effect, but be careful, these cookies are rare, and you'll need to help the community again before being able to receive another one."); next; goto l_Bye; @@ -167,8 +161,8 @@ l_Control: mesq l("Common, don't be like that and loosen up! Don't you want to know who's behind all of this?!"); menu - l("Oh yes please, I'd really like to know!"), l_Friends, - l("Fine, tell me, who are these mysterious aliens?"), --, + l("Why not, this might get interesting."), l_Friends, + l("Fine, tell me, who are these mysterious aliens?"), -, l("No, and I gotta go, see you."), l_Kick; mes ""; @@ -185,15 +179,15 @@ l_Kick: close; l_GetCookie: - mesq l("How was the cookie? Awesome isn't it?"); + mesq l("How was the cookie? Tasty, wasn't it?"); next; - mesq l("If you still want another one, you know what to do!"); + mesq l("If you want another one, you know what to do!"); next; l_Bye: closedialog; - npctalk3 l("Bye !"); + npctalk3 l("See you later!"); close; } |