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author | Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr> | 2014-02-11 11:13:07 +0400 |
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committer | Alige <aligetmw@hotmail.fr> | 2014-02-11 11:36:04 +0400 |
commit | b4de3f0dc752e4c526a57c7dd0be79ea23e55771 (patch) | |
tree | 27ca5b627664d8dbecc6813de0a11cf80d306308 /npc/000-0 | |
parent | 69459ff452df5fc971166e4fe53ab52254761fee (diff) | |
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English fixes done Qwerty Dragon.
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diff --git a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt index 13cfb43b..3ba40b55 100644 --- a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt +++ b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt @@ -1,6 +1,7 @@ // Evol scripts. // Authors: // 4144 +// Qwerty Dragon // Reid // Vasily_Makarov // Description: @@ -16,11 +17,11 @@ OnTouch: mesn "Narrator"; mes col(l("You are on a raft, adrift in the sea."), 9); next; - mes col(l("You realize you can't remember anything."), 9); + mes col(l("With hunger, thirst, and sleep as your only companions; you have the disturbing realization that you can't remember anything of your former life or identity."), 9); next; - mes col(l("Suddenly, you hear a voice up in the sky."), 9); + mes col(l("All of a sudden, you hear voices from above."), 9); next; - mes col(l("As you open your eyes, you see a large ship before you."), 9); + mes col(l("Your body aches, even your hair hurts, and the daylight is painful; but still you open your eyes and see a large ship before you!"), 9); next; mes col(l("Aboard stand sailors trying to communicate with you."), 9); next; |