- Added up the locations but temporal names of Poring track npcs. Will be worked

  on over time. [erKURITA]
- Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos on most of 
  the npc\guides. Visual update to the guards, for short. [erKURITA]
- Added some info to the docs.[erKURITA]
- Added "case" npcs of lighthalzen, they're the first on npc/cities/? Mostly guards. [erKURITA]

git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@6025 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec

8 files changed, 361 insertions, 646 deletions

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt b/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt
index 703277552..69a791287 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_alb.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= kobra_k88

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.3

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena  0.5.2 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -14,29 +14,22 @@
 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

 //= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]

 //=     to Muad_Dib

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================ 

 

 //North

 alberta.gat,23,238,4	script	Guide::Alb_Guide	105,{

 	cutin "prt_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "Welcome to Alberta,";

-	mes "the Port City. Feel free";

-	mes "to ask me if you're having";

-	mes "trouble finding anything in";

-	mes "town, or if you just need";

-	mes "guidance around the city.";

+	mes "Welcome to Alberta, the Port City.";

+	mes "Feel free to ask me if you're having trouble finding anything in town, or if you just need guidance around the city.";

 L_MENU:

 	next;

 	menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 L_CITY:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-  	mes "Please select";

-  	mes "a location from";

-  	mes "the following menu.";

-  	mes "Would you like me";

- 	mes "to mark locations";

-  	mes "on your Mini-Map?";

+  	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+  	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

   	next;

   	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;

 L_NO:

@@ -48,56 +41,35 @@ L_CONT:
 L_MENU_2:

 	menu "^FF0000Merchant Guild^000000",L_MERCHANT,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Inn",L_INN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

- 	mes "Please ask me to Remove";

- 	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

- 	mes "no longer wish to have the";

- 	mes "location marks displayed";

- 	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+ 	mes "Please ask me to Remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_MERCHANT:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "The Merchant Guild,";

-	mes "handles Job Changes";

-	mes "to the Merchant Class,";

-	mes "and is located in the";

-	mes "southwest corner";

-	mes "of Alberta.";

+	mes "The Merchant Guild, handles Job Changes to the Merchant Class, and is located in the southwest corner of Alberta.";

 	viewpoint 1,33,41,1,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WEAPON:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "The Weapon Shop";

-	mes "can be found in the";

-	mes "southern end of Alberta.";

+	mes "The Weapon Shop can be found in the southern end of Alberta.";

 	viewpoint 1,117,37,2,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "The Tool Shop";

-	mes "is kind of close";

-	mes "to the center of";

-	mes "Alberta. It shouldn't";

-	mes "be too hard to find.";

+	mes "The Tool Shop is kind of close to the center of Alberta. It shouldn't be too hard to find.";

 	viewpoint 1,98,154,3,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_INN:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "There's and Inn";

-	mes "at the northern";

-	mes "end of Alberta";

-	mes "where you can rest.";

+	mes "There's and Inn at the northern end of Alberta where you can rest.";

 	viewpoint 1,65,233,4,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_FORGE:

 	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-	mes "The Forge in Alberta";

-	mes "is in the same building";

-	mes "as the Merchant Guild.";

-	mes "it's to the southwest.";

+	mes "The Forge in Alberta is in the same building as the Merchant Guild. It's to the southwest.";

 	viewpoint 1,33,41,5,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

@@ -118,35 +90,19 @@ L_REMOVE:
   	goto L_MENU;

 L_NOTICE:

  	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

- 	mes "Advances in sorcery and";

- 	mes "technology have allowed";

- 	mes "us to update our information";

- 	mes "system, enabling up to mark";

-  	mes "locations on your Mini-Map";

-  	mes "for easier navigation.";

+ 	mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

-  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  	mes "in the upper right corner";

-  	mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  	mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  	mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  	mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

- 	mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  	mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

- 	mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  	mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

- 	mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

- 	mes "here in the city of Alberta.";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Alberta.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

  	mes "[Alberta Guide]";

- 	mes "Be safe when you";

- 	mes "travel and don't hesitate";

-	mes "to ask me if you have any";

-	mes "questions about Alberta.";

+ 	mes "Be safe when you travel and don't hesitate to ask me if you have any questions about Alberta.";

 	cutin "prt_soldier",255; 

  	close;

 }

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_alde.txt b/npc/guides/guides_alde.txt
index d1b37cfce..f0e891a80 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_alde.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_alde.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= kobra_k88

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.3

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena 7.15 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -13,22 +13,19 @@
 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

 //= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]

 //=     to Muad_Dib

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================

 

 

 aldebaran.gat,139,63,4	script	Soldier::Alde_Guide	105,{

 	cutin "prt_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Al De Baran Guard]";

-	mes "I'm just an ordinary guard";

-	mes "that you could find in any other";

-	mes "city. I don't think I even have a";

-	mes "name...";

+	mes "I'm just an ordinary guard that you could find in any other city.";

+	mes "I don't think I even have a name...";

 	next;

 	mes "[Al De Baran Guard]";

-	mes "I am in charge of the Service";

-	mes "Guides from the Al De Baran";

-	mes "Garrison. Let me guide you";

-	mes "through our town!";

+	mes "I am in charge of the Service Guides from the Al De Baran Garrison.";

+	mes "Let me guide you through our town!";

 	next;

 	menu "Get location Guide.",-,"End conversation.",L_End;

 		viewpoint 1,57,222,1,0xFF6633;

@@ -47,11 +44,8 @@ aldebaran.gat,139,63,4	script	Soldier::Alde_Guide	105,{
 	close;

 L_End:

 	mes "[Al De Baran Guard]";

-	mes "We are sworn to protect Al De";

-	mes "Baran! May the forces of evil";

-	mes "always be crushed by the";

-	mes "righteous fist of good!";

-		cutin "prt_soldier",255;

+	mes "We are sworn to protect Al De Baran! May the forces of evil always be crushed by the righteous fist of good!";

+	cutin "prt_soldier",255;

 	close;

 }

 

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_einbe.txt b/npc/guides/guides_einbe.txt
index 75133fdfe..73ab89a36 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_einbe.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_einbe.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= Muad_dib

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.2

+//= 1.3

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena 7.15 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -13,152 +13,106 @@
 //= 1.0a Conversion to eA format [MasterOfMuppets]

 //= 1.1 missing tabs [Lupus]

 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

+//= 1.3 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================

-

-

 einbech.gat,67,37,4 script Guide#1::Einbech_Guide 852,{

-  cutin "ein_soldier",2;

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "Welcome to Einbech,";

-  mes "the Mining Town. We're";

-  mes "here to assist tourists,";

-  mes "so if you have any questions,";

-  mes "please feel free to ask us.";

+	cutin "ein_soldier",2;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "Welcome to Einbech, the Mining Town.";

+	mes "We're here to assist tourists, so if you have any questions, please feel free to ask us.";

 L_MENU:

-  next;

-  menu "City Guide",-,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

+	next;

+	menu "City Guide",-,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "Please select";

-  mes "a location from";

-  mes "the following menu.";

-  mes "Would you like me";

-  mes "to mark locations";

-  mes "on your Mini-Map?";

-  next;

-  menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",-;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

+	next;

+	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",-;

 

-  set @COMPASS_CHECK,0;

-  goto L_CONT;

+	set @COMPASS_CHECK,0;

+	goto L_CONT;

 L_YES:

-  set @COMPASS_CHECK,1;

+	set @COMPASS_CHECK,1;

 L_CONT:

 L_MENU_2:

-  menu "Train Station",L_TRAIN,"Tavern",L_TAVERN,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Swordman Guild",L_SWORD,"Mine",L_MINE,"Cancel",-;

+	menu "Train Station",L_TRAIN,"Tavern",L_TAVERN,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Swordman Guild",L_SWORD,"Mine",L_MINE,"Cancel",-;

 

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";

-  mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

-  mes "no longer wish to have the";

-  mes "location marks displayed";

-  mes "on your Mini-Map.";

-  goto L_MENU;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "Please ask me to Remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

+	goto L_MENU;

 L_TRAIN:

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "The Train Stations are";

-  mes "located in the nortwest";

-  mes "and northeast parts of";

-  mes "Einbech. There, you can";

-  mes "take a train to Einbroch.";

-  mes "long, everyday.";

-  viewpoint 1,44,216,1,0xFF0000;

-  next;

-  goto L_WIPE;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "The Train Stations are located in the nortwest and northeast parts of Einbech.";

+	mes "There, you can take a train to Einbroch. They are running between here and Einbroch all day long, everyday.";

+	viewpoint 1,44,216,1,0xFF0000;

+	next;

+	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TAVERN:

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "The Tavern is located";

-  mes "in the southern part of";

-  mes "Einbech. It's a nice place";

-  mes "to relax after a long day.";

-  viewpoint 1,145,112,2,0xFF00FF;

-  next; 

-  goto L_WIPE;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "The Tavern is located in the southern part of Einbech.";

+	mes "It's a nice place to relax after a long day.";

+	viewpoint 1,145,112,2,0xFF00FF;

+	next; 

+	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "You can find the Tool";

-  mes "Shop in the center of";

-  mes "Einbech. There, you can";

-  mes "purchase any tools you";

-  mes "might need for your travels.";

-  viewpoint 1,177,135,3,0xFF00FF;

-  next; 

-  goto L_WIPE;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "You can find the Tool Shop in the center of Einbech.";

+	mes "There, you can purchase any tools you might need for your travels.";

+	viewpoint 1,177,135,3,0xFF00FF;

+	next; 

+	goto L_WIPE;

 L_SWORD:

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "The Swordman Guild";

-  mes "is located in the eastern";

-  mes "outskirts of Einbech. It's";

-  mes "under construction and they";

-  mes "haven't started accepting";

-  mes "applications.";

-  viewpoint 1,253,109,4,0xFF00FF;

-  next; 

-  goto L_WIPE;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "The Swordman Guild is located in the eastern outskirts of Einbech.";

+	mes "It's under construction and they haven't started accepting applications.";

+	viewpoint 1,253,109,4,0xFF00FF;

+	next; 

+	goto L_WIPE;

 L_MINE:

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "The Mine, wich is";

-  mes "Einbech's major industry,";

-  mes "is located in the northern";

-  mes "part of this town. It's where";

-  mes "we get all our ores, although";

-  mes "monsters get in the miners way.";

-  viewpoint 1,138,250,5,0x00FF00;

-  next;

-  goto L_WIPE; 

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "The Mine, which is Einbech's major industry, is located in the northern part of this town.";

+	mes "It's where we get all of our ores, although monsters get in the mines way.";

+	viewpoint 1,138,250,5,0x00FF00;

+	next;

+	goto L_WIPE; 

 L_WIPE:

-  if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

-  viewpoint 2,44,216,1,0xFF0000;

-  viewpoint 2,145,112,2,0xFF00FF;

-  viewpoint 2,177,135,3,0xFF00FF;

-  viewpoint 2,253,109,4,0xFF00FF;

-  viewpoint 2,138,250,5,0x00FF00;

-  goto L_MENU_2;

+	if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

+	viewpoint 2,44,216,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,145,112,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,177,135,3,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,253,109,4,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,138,250,5,0x00FF00;

+	goto L_MENU_2;

 L_REMOVE:

-  viewpoint 2,44,216,1,0xFF0000;

-  viewpoint 2,145,112,2,0xFF00FF;

-  viewpoint 2,177,135,3,0xFF00FF;

-  viewpoint 2,253,109,4,0xFF00FF;

-  viewpoint 2,138,250,5,0x00FF00;

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "Okay, the marks from";

-  mes "your Mini-Map have been";

-  mes "removed. If you need any";

-  mes "guidance around Einbroch";

-  mes "please let me or one of the";

-  mes "other Einbech Guides know.";

-  goto L_MENU;

+	viewpoint 2,44,216,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,145,112,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,177,135,3,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,253,109,4,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,138,250,5,0x00FF00;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "Okay, the marks from your Mini-Map have been removed.";

+	mes "If you need any guidance around Einbroch please let me or one of the other Einbech Guides know.";

+	goto L_MENU;

 L_NOTICE:

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "Through the technology of";

-  mes "the Schwartzwalt Republic,";

-  mes "we've upgraded to a digital";

-  mes "information system that allows";

-  mes "us to mark locations on your";

-  mes "Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

-  next;

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  mes "in the upper right corner";

-  mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

-  next;

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

-  mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

-  mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

-  mes "here in Einbech, adventurer.";

-  goto L_MENU;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "Through the technology of the Schwartzwalt Republic, we've upgraded to a digital information system that allows us to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

+	next;

+  	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	next;

+  	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Einbech.";

+ 	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

-  mes "[Einbech Guide]";

-  mes "We hope that you";

-  mes "enjoy your travels";

-  mes "here in Einbech.";

-  cutin "ein_soldier",255; 

-  close;

+	mes "[Einbech Guide]";

+	mes "We hope that you";

+	mes "enjoy your travels";

+	mes "here in Einbech.";

+	cutin "ein_soldier",255; 

+	close;

 }

 

 einbech.gat,48,214,4	duplicate(Einbech_Guide)	Guide#2	852
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_einbr.txt b/npc/guides/guides_einbr.txt
index 532c8beb3..439ccab4f 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_einbr.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_einbr.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= Reddozen

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.2

+//= 1.3

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena 7.15 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -12,210 +12,156 @@
 //= 1.0b missing tabs, fixed Guide coords [Lupus]

 //= 1.1 added 1 more Guide NPC, thanx to Justin84 [Lupus]

 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

+//= 1.3 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================

 

 

 einbroch.gat,72,202,4	script	Guide#1::Einbroch_Guide	852,{

-  cutin "ein_soldier",2;

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "Welcome to Einbroch,";

-  mes "the City of Steel.";

-  mes "Please ask me if you";

-  mes "have any questions";

+	cutin "ein_soldier",2;

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "Welcome to Einbroch, the City of Steel.";

+	mes "Please ask me if you have any questions";

 

 M_Menu:

-  next;

-  menu "City Guide",-, "Remove Marks from Mini-Map",M_2, "Notice",M_3, "Cancel",M_End;

+	next;

+	menu "City Guide",-, "Remove Marks from Mini-Map",M_2, "Notice",M_3, "Cancel",M_End;

 

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "Please select";

-  mes "a location from";

-  mes "the following menu.";

-  mes "Would you like me";

-  mes "to mark locations";

-  mes "on your Mini-Map";

-  next;

-  menu "No Thanks",-,"Yes Please",sM_1b;

-  

-  set @COMPASS_CHECK,0;

-  goto L_Cont;

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map";

+	next;

+	menu "No Thanks",-,"Yes Please",sM_1b;

+	

+	set @COMPASS_CHECK,0;

+	goto L_Cont;

 

-  sM_1b:

-  set @COMPASS_CHECK,1;

+	sM_1b:

+	set @COMPASS_CHECK,1;

 

-  L_Cont:

+	L_Cont:

 sM_Menu:

-  menu  "^FF0000Airport^000000",-, "Train Station",sM_2b, "Factory",sM_2c, "Plaza",sM_2d,

-  "Hotel",sM_2e, "Weapon Shop",sM_2f, "Laboratory",sM_2g, "Blacksmith Guild",sM_2h, 

-  "Einbroch Tower",sM_2i, 

-  "Cancel", SM_2j;

+	menu "^FF0000Airport^000000",-,"Train Station",sM_2b,"Factory",sM_2c,"Plaza",sM_2d,

+	"Hotel",sM_2e,"Weapon Shop",sM_2f,"Laboratory",sM_2g,"Blacksmith Guild",sM_2h,

+	"Einbroch Tower",sM_2i,"Cancel",SM_2j;

 

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The ^FF0000Airport^000000 is is located";

-  mes "in the northwestern part";

-  mes "of the city. There you can";

-  mes "see our city's pride and joy, the";

-  mes "Airship. Remember that you must pay";

-  mes "admission to board the Airship.";

-  viewpoint 1,63,208,1,0xFF0000;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

-  sM_2b:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The Train Station is";

-  mes "located in the northeast";

-  mes "part of Einbroch. Trains";

-  mes "running between here";

-  mes "and Einbech run all day";

-  mes "long, everyday.";

-  viewpoint 1,238,272,2,0x0000FF;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

-  sM_2c:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The Factory, perhaps the";

-  mes "most important facility in";

-  mes "Einbroch, is located in the";

-  mes "southern part of the city.";

-  viewpoint 1,149,80,3,0x00FF00;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

-  sM_2d:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The Plaza, our biggest";

-  mes "shopping district, can be";

-  mes "found just east from the";

-  mes "center of Einbroch";

-  viewpoint 1,231,189,4,0xFF00FF;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

-  sM_2e:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The Hotel is east of";

-  mes "the Plaza and offers top";

-  mes "caliber accomodations.";

-  mes "There, you can enjoy your";

-  mes "stay in Einbroch in comfort~";

-  viewpoint 1,257,200,5,0x00AAFF;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

-  sM_2f:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The Weapon Shop is";

-  mes "located north from the";

-  mes "Plaza. There you can";

-  mes "purchase weapons for";

-  mes "your personal use.";

-  viewpoint 1,217,212,6,0xDDAA00;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

-  sM_2g:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The Laboratory is an";

-  mes "annex of the factory and";

-  mes "is located in the southwest";

-  mes "sector of Einbech";

-  viewpoint 1,43,45,7,0xDDAA00;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

-  sM_2h:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The Blacksmith Guild is";

-  mes "located in the southeast";

-  mes "part of Einbroch. You can";

-  mes "upgrade your equipment";

-  mes "by using their services.";

-  viewpoint 1,255,105,8,0xDDAA00;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

-  sM_2i:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "The Einbroch Tower is";

-  mes "located in the center of";

-  mes "the city. From the top of";

-  mes "the tower, you can view";

-  mes "all of Einbroch.";

-  viewpoint 1,173,195,9,0xDDAA00;

-  next;

-  goto sL_Wipe;

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The ^FF0000Airport^000000 is is located in the northwestern part of the city.";

+	mes "There you can see our city's pride and joy, the Airship.";

+	mes "Remember that you must pay admission to board the Airship.";

+	viewpoint 1,63,208,1,0xFF0000;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

+	sM_2b:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The Train Station is located in the northeast part of Einbroch.";

+	mes "Trains are running between here and Einbech all day long, everyday.";

+	viewpoint 1,238,272,2,0x0000FF;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

+sM_2c:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The Factory, perhaps the most important facility in Einbroch, is located in the southern part of the city.";

+	viewpoint 1,149,80,3,0x00FF00;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

+sM_2d:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The Plaza, our biggest shopping district, can be found just east from the center of Einbroch";

+	viewpoint 1,231,189,4,0xFF00FF;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

+sM_2e:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The Hotel is east of the Plaza and offers top caliber accomodations.";

+	mes "There, you can enjoy your stay in Einbroch in comfort~";

+	viewpoint 1,257,200,5,0x00AAFF;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

+sM_2f:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The Weapon Shop is located north from the Plaza.";

+	mes "There you can purchase weapons for your personal use.";

+	viewpoint 1,217,212,6,0xDDAA00;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

+sM_2g:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The Laboratory is an annex of the factory and is located in the southwest sector of Einbech";

+	viewpoint 1,43,45,7,0xDDAA00;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

+sM_2h:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The Blacksmith Guild is located in the southeast part of Einbroch.";

+	mes "You can upgrade your equipment by using their services.";

+	viewpoint 1,255,105,8,0xDDAA00;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

+sM_2i:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "The Einbroch Tower is located in the center of the city.";

+	mes "From the top of the tower, you can view all of Einbroch.";

+	viewpoint 1,173,195,9,0xDDAA00;

+	next;

+	goto sL_Wipe;

 

-  SM_2j:

-  mes "Please ask me to Remove";

-  mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

-  mes "no longer wish to have the";

-  mes "location marks displayed";

-  mes "on your Mini-Map.";

-  goto M_Menu;

+SM_2j:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "Please ask me to Remove";

+	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

+	mes "no longer wish to have the";

+	mes "location marks displayed";

+	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+	goto M_Menu;

 

-  sL_Wipe:

-  if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1) goto sM_Menu;

-  viewpoint 2,63,208,1,0xFF0000;

-  viewpoint 2,238,272,2,0x0000FF;

-  viewpoint 2,149,80,3,0x00FF00;

-  viewpoint 2,231,189,4,0xFF00FF;

-  viewpoint 2,257,200,5,0x00AAFF;

-  viewpoint 2,217,212,6,0xDDAA00;

-  viewpoint 2,43,45,7,0xDDAA00;

-  viewpoint 2,255,105,8,0xDDAA00;

-  viewpoint 2,173,195,9,0xDDAA00;

-  if (@COMPASS_CHECK == 0) goto sM_Menu;

+sL_Wipe:

+	if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1) goto sM_Menu;

+	viewpoint 2,63,208,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,238,272,2,0x0000FF;

+	viewpoint 2,149,80,3,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,231,189,4,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,257,200,5,0x00AAFF;

+	viewpoint 2,217,212,6,0xDDAA00;

+	viewpoint 2,43,45,7,0xDDAA00;

+	viewpoint 2,255,105,8,0xDDAA00;

+	viewpoint 2,173,195,9,0xDDAA00;

+	if (@COMPASS_CHECK == 0) goto sM_Menu;

 

 M_2:

-  viewpoint 2,63,208,1,0xFF0000;

-  viewpoint 2,238,272,2,0x0000FF;

-  viewpoint 2,149,80,3,0x00FF00;

-  viewpoint 2,231,189,4,0xFF00FF;

-  viewpoint 2,257,200,5,0x00AAFF;

-  viewpoint 2,217,212,6,0xDDAA00;

-  viewpoint 2,43,45,7,0xDDAA00;

-  viewpoint 2,255,105,8,0xDDAA00;

-  viewpoint 2,173,195,9,0xDDAA00;

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "Okay, the marks from";

-  mes "your Mini-Map have been";

-  mes "removed. If you need any";

-  mes "guidance around Einbroch;";

-  mes "please let me or one of the";

-  mes "other Einbroch Guides know.";

-  cutin "ein_soldier",255;

+	viewpoint 2,63,208,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,238,272,2,0x0000FF;

+	viewpoint 2,149,80,3,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,231,189,4,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,257,200,5,0x00AAFF;

+	viewpoint 2,217,212,6,0xDDAA00;

+	viewpoint 2,43,45,7,0xDDAA00;

+	viewpoint 2,255,105,8,0xDDAA00;

+	viewpoint 2,173,195,9,0xDDAA00;

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "Okay, the marks from your Mini-Map have been removed.";

+	mes "If you need any guidance around Einbroch, please let me or one of the other Einbroch Guides know.";

+	cutin "ein_soldier",255;

+	goto M_Menu;

 

-  goto M_Menu;

-M_3:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "Through the technology of";

-  mes "the Schwaltzvalt Republic,";

-  mes "we've upgraded to a digital";

-  mes "information system that allows";

-  mes "us to mark locations on your";

-  mes "Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

-  next;

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  mes "in the upper right cornor";

-  mes "of the screen. If you cant";

-  mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

-  next;

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

-  mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  mes "out of your Mini-Map. We";

-  mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

-  mes "here in Einbroch, adventurer.";

-  goto M_Menu;

+L_NOTICE:

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "Through the technology of the Schwartzwalt Republic, we've upgraded to a digital information system that allows us to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

+	next;

+  	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	next;

+  	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Einbroch.";

+ 	goto L_MENU;

 

 M_End:

-  mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

-  mes "We hope that you";

-  mes "enjoy your travels";

-  mes "here in Einbroch.";

-  mes "Oh, and please be";

-  mes "aware of the Smog Alerts";

-  cutin "ein_soldier",255;

-  close;

+	mes "[Einbroch Guide]";

+	mes "We hope that you enjoy your travels here in Einbroch. Oh, and please be aware of the Smog Alerts";

+	cutin "ein_soldier",255;

+	close;

 }

 

 einbroch.gat,155,43,4	duplicate(Einbroch_Guide)	Guide#2	852

-einbroch.gat,162,317,4	duplicate(Einbroch_Guide)	Guide#3	852
\ No newline at end of file
+einbroch.gat,162,317,4	duplicate(Einbroch_Guide)	Guide#3	852

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_hu.txt b/npc/guides/guides_hu.txt
index 5079c35a2..6af4659fc 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_hu.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_hu.txt
@@ -3,13 +3,14 @@
 //===== By: ==================================================

 //= erKURITA

 //===== Current Version: =====================================

-//= 1.0

+//= 1.5

 //===== Compatible With: =====================================

 //= eAthena 1.0

 //===== Description: =========================================

 //= Guard/Guide NPC of City of Hugel.

 //===== Additional Comments: =================================

 //= 1.0 Started the script. [erKURITA]

+//= 1.5 Minor fixes ._. [erKURITA]

 //============================================================

 hugel.gat,98,57,3	script	Old Lady	863,{

 

@@ -48,7 +49,7 @@ M_Menu:
 			"Hunter Guild",M_1_8a,

 			"^000066Poring Track 1^000000",M_1_9,

 			"^000066Poring Track 2^000000",M_1_10,

-			"^000066Bingo House^000000",M_1_11,

+			"Bingo House",M_1_11,

 			"Wipe all indications from mini-map",M_1_8,

 			"Cancel", M_End;

 

@@ -108,6 +109,7 @@ M_Menu:
 			mes "[Old Lady]";

 			mes "The 'Bingo House' is located at the northwest of Hugel. Lay your bet ladies and gentlements!";

 			viewpoint 1,57,207,7,0xFF8000;

+			goto sL_Wipe;

 		M_1_8:

 			set @COMPASS_CHECK, 2;

 

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_izl.txt b/npc/guides/guides_izl.txt
index 26c526f17..76cb6502a 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_izl.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_izl.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= kobra_k88

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.3

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena 7.15 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -13,27 +13,21 @@
 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

 //= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]

 //=     to Muad_Dib

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================

 

 izlude.gat,121,87,6	script	Guide	105,{

 	cutin "prt_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "Welcome to Izlude,";

-	mes "Prontera's satellite city.";

-	mes "If you need any guidance";

-	mes "around Izlude, feel free";

-	mes "to ask me at anytime.";

+	mes "Welcome to Izlude, Prontera's satellite city.";

+	mes "If you need any guidance around Izlude, feel free to ask me at anytime.";

 L_MENU:

 	next;

 	menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 L_CITY:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-  	mes "Please select";

-  	mes "a location from";

-  	mes "the following menu.";

-  	mes "Would you like me";

- 	mes "to mark locations";

-  	mes "on your Mini-Map?";

+  	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+  	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

   	next;

   	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;

 L_NO:

@@ -45,112 +39,78 @@ L_CONT:
 L_MENU_2:

 	menu "^FF0000Swordman Association^000000",L_SWORD,"Swordman Hall",L_HALL,"Arena",L_ARENA,"Izlude Marina",L_MARINA,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Cancel",-;

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

- 	mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";

- 	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

- 	mes "no longer wish to have the";

- 	mes "location marks displayed";

- 	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+ 	mes "Please ask me to remove marks from then Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_SWORD:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "The Swordman Association";

-	mes "is located on an island that is";

-	mes "in west Izlude. If you're thinking";

-	mes "of changing jobs to Swordman,";

-	mes "you should check it out.";

+	mes "The Swordman Association is located on an island that is in west Izlude.";

+	mes "If you're thinking of changing jobs to Swordman, you should check it out.";

 	viewpoint 1,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_HALL:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "The Swordman Hall";

-	mes "is located on the eastern";

-	mes "island connected to Izlude.";

+	mes "The Swordman Hall is located on the eastern island connected to Izlude.";

 	viewpoint 1,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_ARENA:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "Izlude's famous";

-	mes "Arena is located at the";

-	mes "northern end of Izlude.";

+	mes "Izlude's famous Arena is located at the northern end of Izlude.";

 	viewpoint 1,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_MARINA:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "You can find the";

-	mes "Marina in the northeast";

-	mes "part of Izlude. There, you can";

-	mes "ride a ship wich will take you";

-	mes "to Alberta or Byalan Island.";

+	mes "You can find the Marina in the northeast part of Izlude.";

+	mes "There, you can ride a ship which will take you to Alberta or Byalan Island.";

 	viewpoint 1,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WEAPON:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "You can easily";

-	mes "find the Weapon Shop";

-	mes "in northwest Izlude.";

+	mes "You can easily find the Weapon Shop in northwest Izlude.";

 	viewpoint 1,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

 	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-	mes "The Tool Shop shouldn't";

-	mes "be too hard to find in the";

-	mes "northeast part of Izlude.";

+	mes "The Tool Shop shouldn't be too hard to find in the northeast part of Izlude.";

 	viewpoint 1,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WIPE:

- 		if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

-		viewpoint 2,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

+ 	if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

+	viewpoint 2,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

 	goto L_MENU_2;

 L_REMOVE:

-		viewpoint 2,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,52,140,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,214,130,2,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,128,225,3,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,200,180,4,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,111,149,5,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,148,148,6,0xFF00FF;

   	goto L_MENU;

 L_NOTICE:

  	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

- 	mes "Advances in sorcery and";

- 	mes "technology have allowed";

- 	mes "us to update our information";

- 	mes "system, enabling up to mark";

-  	mes "locations on your Mini-Map";

-  	mes "for easier navigation.";

+ 	mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

-  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  	mes "in the upper right corner";

-  	mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  	mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  	mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  	mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

- 	mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  	mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

- 	mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  	mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

- 	mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

- 	mes "here in the city of Izlude.";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Izlude.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

  	mes "[Izlude Guide]";

- 	mes "Okay then, feel";

- 	mes "free to come to me";

-	mes "if you ever geel lost";

-	mes "around Izlude, alright?";

+ 	mes "Okay then, feel free to come to me if you ever geel lost around Izlude, alright?";

 	cutin "prt_soldier",255; 

  	close;

 }

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt b/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt
index 7a2141734..053b93cfd 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= kobra_k88

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.3a

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena  0.5.2 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

@@ -15,28 +15,22 @@
 //= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets]

 //=     to Muad_Dib

 //= 1.3a Fixed some problems with duplicated text, thanks to muad_dib [MasterOfMuppets]

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================

 

 

 payon.gat,162,67,4	script	Guide	708,{

 	cutin "pay_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "Welcome to the";

-	mes "mountain city of Payon.";

-	mes "if you're unfammiliar with this";

-	mes "area, I can help you find what";

-	mes "you're looking for around here.";

+	mes "Welcome to the mountain city of Payon.";

+	mes "If you're unfammiliar with this area, I can help you find what you're looking for around here.";

 L_MENU:

 	next;

 	menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 L_CITY:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-  	mes "Please select";

-  	mes "a location from";

-  	mes "the following menu.";

-  	mes "Would you like me";

- 	mes "to mark locations";

-  	mes "on your Mini-Map?";

+  	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+  	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

   	next;

   	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;

 L_NO:

@@ -48,143 +42,103 @@ L_CONT:
 L_MENU_2:

 	menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Pub",L_PUB,"Central Palace",L_PALACE,"The Empress",L_EMPRESS,"Palace Annex",L_ANNEX,"Royal Kitchen",L_KITCHEN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";

- 	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

- 	mes "no longer wish to have the";

- 	mes "location marks displayed";

- 	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+ 	mes "Please ask me to remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_ARCHER:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Archer Guild handles";

-	mes "Job Changes to the Archer";

-	mes "Class. You'll need to enter";

-	mes "the Archer Village wich is";

-	mes "to the northeast of Payon.";

+	mes "The Archer Guild handles Job Changes to the Archer Class.";

+	mes "You'll need to enter the Archer Village wich is to the northeast of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WEAPON:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Weapon Shop";

-	mes "can be found in the";

-	mes "northwest corner of";

-	mes "the city of Payon.";

+	mes "The Weapon Shop can be found in the northwest corner of the city of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Tool Shop";

-	mes "is located near";

-	mes "the northwest";

-	mes "corner of Payon.";

+	mes "The Tool Shop is located near the northwest corner of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_PUB:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Pub can be";

-	mes "found in the northeast";

-	mes "part of Payon. It's the";

-	mes "best place to relax after";

-	mes "a long day of hunting.";

+	mes "The Pub can be found in the northeast part of Payon.";

+	mes "It's the best place to relax after a long day of hunting.";

 	viewpoint 1,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_PALACE:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Central Palace";

-	mes "is located to the north";

-	mes "within the city of Payon.";

+	mes "The Central Palace is located to the north within the city of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_EMPRESS:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Empress";

-	mes "can be found to the";

-	mes "northwest in Payon.";

+	mes "The Empress can be found to the northwest in Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_ANNEX:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Palace Annex";

-	mes "can be found in the";

-	mes "western part of Payon.";

+	mes "The Palace Annex can be found in the western part of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_KITCHEN:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Royal Kitchen";

-	mes "is located near the";

-	mes "northern end of Payon.";

+	mes "The Royal Kitchen is located near the northern end of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_FORGE:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Forge is";

-	mes "situaded near";

-	mes "the center of Payon.";

+	mes "The Forge is situaded near the center of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

 	next;

 	goto L_WIPE;	

 L_WIPE:

- 		if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

-		viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

+ 	if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

+	viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

 	goto L_MENU_2;

 L_REMOVE:

-		viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

-		viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

+	viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00;

+	viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00;

   	goto L_MENU;

+

 L_NOTICE:

  	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Advances in sorcery and";

- 	mes "technology have allowed";

- 	mes "us to update our information";

- 	mes "system, enabling up to mark";

-  	mes "locations on your Mini-Map";

-  	mes "for easier navigation.";

+ 	mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  	mes "in the upper right corner";

-  	mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  	mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  	mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  	mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  	mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

- 	mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  	mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

- 	mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

- 	mes "here in the city of Payon.";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Payon.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

  	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Be safe in";

- 	mes "your travels,";

-	mes "brave adventurer.";

+ 	mes "Be safe in your travels, brave adventurer.";

 		cutin "pay_soldier",255; 

  	close;

 }

@@ -192,22 +146,15 @@ L_END:
 pay_arche.gat,85,30,2	script	Guide	708,{

 	cutin "pay_soldier",2;

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "Welcome to the";

-	mes "mountain city of Payon.";

-	mes "if you're unfammiliar with this";

-	mes "area, I can help you find what";

-	mes "you're looking for around here.";

+	mes "Welcome to the mountain city of Payon.";

+	mes "If you're unfammiliar with this area, I can help you find what you're looking for around here.";

 L_MENU:

 	next;

 	menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END;

 L_CITY:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-  	mes "Please select";

-  	mes "a location from";

-  	mes "the following menu.";

-  	mes "Would you like me";

- 	mes "to mark locations";

-  	mes "on your Mini-Map?";

+  	mes "Please select a location from the following menu.";

+  	mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?";

   	next;

   	menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO;

 L_NO:

@@ -217,83 +164,55 @@ L_YES:
   	set @COMPASS_CHECK,1;

 L_CONT:

 L_MENU_2:

-	menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Payon Dungeon",L_DUNGEON,"Cancel",-;

+	menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Pub",L_PUB,"Central Palace",L_PALACE,"The Empress",L_EMPRESS,"Palace Annex",L_ANNEX,"Royal Kitchen",L_KITCHEN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-;

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Pleas ask me to Remove";

- 	mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you";

- 	mes "no longer wish to have the";

- 	mes "location marks displayed";

- 	mes "on your Mini-Map.";

+ 	mes "Please ask me to remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_ARCHER:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Archer Guild,";

-	mes "found northeast in";

-	mes "the Archer Village,";

-	mes "handles Job Changes";

-	mes "to the Archer Class.";

+	mes "The Archer Guild, found northeast in the Archer Village, handles Job Changes to the Archer Class.";

 	viewpoint 1,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_TOOL:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The Tool Shop";

-	mes "is located near";

-	mes "the northwest";

-	mes "corner of Payon.";

+	mes "The Tool Shop is located near the northwest corner of Payon.";

 	viewpoint 1,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_DUNGEON:

 	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-	mes "The entrance to";

-	mes "the Payon Dungeon";

-	mes "is located at the west";

-	mes "end of the village.";

+	mes "The entrance to the Payon Dungeon is located at the west end of the village.";

 	viewpoint 1,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

 	next; 

 	goto L_WIPE;

 L_WIPE:

- 		if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

-		viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

+ 	if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2;

+	viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

 	goto L_MENU_2;

 L_REMOVE:

-		viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

-		viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

-		viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

+	viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000;

+	viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF;

+	viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF;

   	goto L_MENU;

+

 L_NOTICE:

  	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Advances in sorcery and";

- 	mes "technology have allowed";

- 	mes "us to update our information";

- 	mes "system, enabling up to mark";

-  	mes "locations on your Mini-Map";

-  	mes "for easier navigation.";

+ 	mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Payon Guide]";

-  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located";

-  	mes "in the upper right corner";

-  	mes "of the screen. If you can't";

-  	mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab";

-  	mes "keys or click the 'Map' button";

-  	mes "in your Basic Information Window.";

+  	mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen.";

+	mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window.";

   	next;

   	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "On your Mini-Map,";

-  	mes "click on the '+' and '-'";

- 	mes "symbols to zoom in and";

-  	mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; 

- 	mes "hope you enjoy your travels";

- 	mes "here in the city of Payon.";

+ 	mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map.";

+	mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Payon.";

  	goto L_MENU;

 L_END:

  	mes "[Payon Guide]";

- 	mes "Be safe in";

- 	mes "your travels,";

-	mes "brave adventurer.";

+ 	mes "Be safe in your travels, brave adventurer.";

 	cutin "pay_soldier",255; 

  	close;

 }

diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt b/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt
index 7d35ec46b..71fc6d4d0 100644
--- a/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt
+++ b/npc/guides/guides_umb.txt
@@ -3,28 +3,22 @@
 //===== By: ================================================== 

 //= Dizzy, Translated by Celest

 //===== Current Version: ===================================== 

-//= 1.2

+//= 1.4

 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== 

 //= eAthena 1.0 +

 //===== Description: ========================================= 

-//=

+//= Umbala tour guide

 //===== Additional Comments: ================================= 

 //= 1.1 Fixed location command format [Lupus]

 //= 1.2 Optimized, updated common guide names [Lupus]

+//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA]

 //============================================================ 

-

-

-// Umbala tour guide

-//===========================================================================

 umbala.gat,128,94,3	script	Ricard	702,{

 	mes "[Ricard]";

-	mes "This sure is an odd place,";

-	mes "perhaps due to the fact that it hasn't been developed,";

-	mes "the roads here can be very perilous.";

+	mes "This sure is an odd place, perhaps due to the fact that it hasn't been developed, and the roads here can be very perilous.";

 	next;

 	mes "[Ricard]";

-	mes "Good thing i've already been here ";

-	mes "for quite some time, so i know the details of the village quite well,";

+	mes "Good thing I've already been here for quite some time, so i know the details of the village quite well.";

 	mes "You may ask me for directions if you want.";

 	next;

 	menu "View buildings",-,"Clear indications",L_MENU_2,"Cancel",L_end1;

@@ -35,49 +29,39 @@ umbala.gat,128,94,3	script	Ricard	702,{
 	menu "Village Chieftain's house",-,"Village Shaman's house",L_room2,"Weapon shop",L_room3,"Equipment shop",L_room4,"Bungee Jumping Spot",L_room5,"Cancel",L_end2;

 

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "The chieftain lives ^FF0000here^000000,";

-		mes "only he understands the languages of outsiders,";

-		mes "perhaps you should see him first.";

+		mes "The chieftain lives ^FF0000here^000000, only he understands the languages of outsiders, perhaps you should see him first.";

 		viewpoint 1,68,251,1,0xFF0000;

 		close;

 

 	L_room2:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "The shaman is known to possess mysterious powers,";

-		mes "his house would be right ^996600here^000000,";

-		mes "it is said that he can manipulate the elements of the Earth easily!";

+		mes "The shaman is known to possess mysterious powers, his house would be right ^996600here^000000, it is said that he can manipulate the elements of the Earth easily!";

 		viewpoint 1,218,187,2,0x996600;

 		close;

 

 	L_room3:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "The weapon shop is ^009933over there^000000,";

-		mes "because of threats from the outside world,";

-		mes "they have been stocking up on";

-		mes "all kinds of weapons.";

+		mes "The weapon shop is ^009933over there^000000, because of threats from the outside world, they have been stocking up on all kinds of weapons.";

 		viewpoint 1,125,155,3,0x009933;

 		close;

 

 	L_room4:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "^3333FFThat^000000 would be the equipment shop,";

-		mes "they sell all types of useful equipment";

-		mes "you should have a look there before continueing your travels.";

+		mes "^3333FFThat^000000 would be the equipment shop, they sell all types of useful equipment.";

+		mes "You should have a look there before continueing your travels.";

 		viewpoint 1,136,127,4,0x3333FF;

 		close;

 

 	L_room5:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "In Umbala there is a 'Bungee Jumping Spot' not seen anywhere else in the world";

-		mes "as you can see ^66CC33over here^000000,";

-		mes "you can try it out if you're feeling brave enough.";

+		mes "In Umbala there is a 'Bungee Jumping Spot' not seen anywhere else in the world as you can see ^66CC33over here^000000,";

+		mes "You can try it out if you're feeling brave enough.";

 		viewpoint 1,138,198,5,0x66CC33;

 		close;

 

 	L_end2:

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "To remove all indications of the minimap";

-		mes "come back and talk to me again.";

+		mes "To remove all indications of the minimap come back and talk to me again.";

 		close;

 

 L_MENU_2:	

@@ -87,7 +71,7 @@ L_MENU_2:
 		viewpoint 2,136,127,4,0x3333FF;

 		viewpoint 2,138,198,5,0x66CC33;

 		mes "[Ricard]";

-		mes "I removed all the indications,";

+		mes "I have removed all the indications.";

 		mes "If you still need any directions, come back and talk to me again.";

 		close;