From a3532e578768c428364f08e847d5d1627a2034d4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: WildX <wildx@evolonline.org>
Date: Tue, 13 Sep 2016 15:42:56 +0000
Subject: Small grammar fixes and lore adaptations in item descriptions

---
 items.xml | 64 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------------------
 1 file changed, 32 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)

(limited to 'items.xml')

diff --git a/items.xml b/items.xml
index 1e120560..dab5620e 100644
--- a/items.xml
+++ b/items.xml
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="501"
         image="usable/acorn.png"
         name="Acorn"
-        description="A natural food, ingredient, bait, or seed."
+        description="A natural food, ingredient, bait or seed."
         useButton="Eat"
         effect="Heal 12-18 HP"
         type="usable"
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="502"
         image="usable/bread.png"
         name="Bread"
-        description="A baked food, ingredient, or bait."
+        description="A baked food, ingredient or bait."
         useButton="Eat"
         effect="Heal 25-40 HP"
         type="usable"
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="503"
         image="usable/fungus.png"
         name="Fungus"
-        description="A peculiar food, ingredient, or remedy against poison."
+        description="A peculiar food, ingredient or remedy against poison."
         useButton="Eat"
         effect="Damage -5%; Defense +5%; Heal 25-35 HP"
         type="usable"
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="504"
         image="usable/cheese.png"
         name="Cheese"
-        description="A yummy food, ingredient, or bait."
+        description="A yummy food, ingredient or bait."
         useButton="Eat"
         effect="Heal 30-50 HP"
         type="usable"
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="505"
         image="usable/pioulegs.png"
         name="Piou Legs"
-        description="A tender food, ingredient, or bait."
+        description="A tender food, ingredient or bait."
         useButton="Eat"
         effect="Heal 7-13 HP"
         type="usable"
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="506"
         image="usable/lettuceleaf.png"
         name="Lettuce Leaf"
-        description="A healthy food, ingredient, or bait."
+        description="A healthy food, ingredient or bait."
         useButton="Eat"
         effect="Heal 15-25 HP"
         type="usable"
@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
         weight="8"/>
     <item id="516"
         image="usable/pumpkinseeds.png"
-        name="Pumpkish Seeds"
+        name="Pumpkin Seeds"
         description="Yucky seeds that threaten to grow out-of-control."
         useButton="Eat"
         hp="1"
@@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="519"
         image="usable/easteregg.png"
         name="Easter Egg"
-        description="A chocolate shell covered of a very thin metal layer."
+        description="A chocolate shell covered in a very thin metal layer."
         useButton="Eat"
         effect="Heal 60-75 HP"
         type="usable"
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="522"
         image="usable/clotholiquor.png"
         name="Clotho Liquor"
-        description="Remedy used between feral warrior training sessions."
+        description="Remedy used in feral warrior training sessions."
         effect="Heal 575-625 HP"
         useButton="Drink"
         type="usable"
@@ -382,15 +382,15 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
         image="usable/shovel.png"
         name="Iron Shovel"
         useButton="Use"
-        description="Discover treasures, dungeons, and raw materials."
+        description="Discover treasures, dungeons and raw materials."
         type="usable"
         weight="210"
         maxFloorOffset="5"/>
     <item id="527"
         image="usable/pumpkinjuice.png"
-        name="Pumpkish Juice"
+        name="Pumpkin Juice"
         useButton="Use"
-        description="Blood-colored juice from madly swarming pumpkish."
+        description="Blood-colored juice from madly swarming pumpkin."
         effect="Heal 30-50 HP"
         type="usable"
         weight="5"
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="529"
         image="usable/curshroom.png"
         name="Curshroom"
-        description="A strange remedy of many possible uses, cure poison."
+        description="A strange remedy of many possible uses, cures poison."
         useButton="Eat"
         effect="Damage per second +10; Heal 40-50 HP"
         type="usable"
@@ -447,14 +447,14 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="534"
         image="usable/book-chorus.png"
         name="Chorus of the Woods"
-        description="Historical foundations of this poem is from centuries ago on the great continent, Ealia."
+        description="This poem was written centuries ago and is from the ancient city of Keshlam."
         useButton="Read"
         type="usable"
         weight="25"/>
     <item id="535"
         image="usable/book-comtheory.png"
         name="Communication Theory"
-        description="Various explanations on the dialogue system."
+        description="Various meta explanations regarding the dialogue system."
         useButton="Read"
         type="usable"
         weight="20"/>
@@ -484,19 +484,19 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="703"
         image="generic/eggshell-half.png"
         name="Half Eggshell"
-        description="Maybe something hatched, or someone was cooking."
+        description="Maybe something hatched, or someone was cooked..."
         type="generic"
         weight="2"/>
     <item id="704"
         image="generic/rattotail.png"
         name="Ratto Tail"
-        description="Hairless tail of ratto."
+        description="Hairless tail of a ratto."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"/>
     <item id="705"
         image="generic/teeth-ratto.png"
         name="Ratto Teeth"
-        description="Sharp incisors of ratto."
+        description="Sharp incisors of a ratto."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"/>
     <item id="706"
@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="707"
         image="generic/squichyclaws.png"
         name="Squichy Claws"
-        description="Claws from a wild squichy."
+        description="Claws from a wild Squichy."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"/>
     <item id="708"
@@ -607,14 +607,14 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="722"
         image="generic/pumpkin.png"
         name="Pumpkin"
-        description="An invasive specimen, sometimes carved during festivals."
+        description="An invasive species, sometimes carved during festivals."
         type="generic"
         weight="530"
         maxFloorOffset="10"/>
     <item id="723"
         image="generic/mushroom-spores.png"
         name="Mushroom Spores"
-        description="Some colored spores, it helps mushrooms to spread across the land."
+        description="Some colored spores that help mushrooms spread across the land."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"
         maxFloorOffset="12"/>
@@ -628,14 +628,14 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="725"
         image="generic/tentacles.png"
         name="Tentacles"
-        description="Boneless appendage of invertebrates."
+        description="Boneless appendage of an invertebrate."
         type="generic"
         weight="8"
         maxFloorOffset="7"/>
     <item id="726"
         image="generic/carp.png"
         name="Common Carp"
-        description="Freshwater is often infested with these pests."
+        description="Freshwater is commonly inhabited by these pests."
         type="generic"
         weight="200"
         maxFloorOffset="9"/>
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="728"
         image="generic/fishingrod.png"
         name="Fishing Rod"
-        description="Designed for sport's fishing."
+        description="Designed for sports fishing."
         type="generic"
         weight="20"
         maxFloorOffset="4"/>
@@ -662,8 +662,8 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
         maxFloorOffset="8"/>
     <item id="730"
         image="generic/letter-stamp.png"
-        name="Guild Certification"
-        description="This piece of paper grants you the exclusive permission to create a guild."
+        name="Clan Certification"
+        description="This piece of paper grants you official permission to found a clan."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"
         maxFloorOffset="4"/>
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="2002"
         image="equipment/hands/ironarmbands.png"
         name="Iron Armbands"
-        description="Heavy armbands that slow-down all but experienced warriors."
+        description="Heavy armbands that slow down all but experienced warriors."
         defense="18"
         level="12"
         type="equip-arms"
@@ -818,7 +818,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="2201"
         image="equipment/legs/trousers.png"
         name="Brown Trousers"
-        description="Classic trousers ornamented with some fluffy fur."
+        description="Classic trousers ornated with some fluffy fur."
         defense="14"
         level="5"
         type="equip-legs"
@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="2901"
         image="equipment/head/pumpkinhat.png"
         name="Pumpkin Hat"
-        description="A carved pumpkin, the face will scare your enemy off."
+        description="A carved pumpkin. Its face might scare your enemy off!"
         defense="2"
         level="4"
         type="equip-head"
@@ -931,7 +931,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="2904"
         image="equipment/head/brimmedfeatherhat.png"
         name="Brimmed Feather Hat"
-        description="Distinguishes someone as traveling."
+        description="Distinguishes someone who is traveling."
         defense="11"
         level="8"
         type="equip-head"
@@ -963,7 +963,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="3200"
         image="equipment/neck/shemagh.png"
         name="Shemagh"
-        description="An improved scarf used by mercenaries in tough environment."
+        description="An improved scarf used by mercenaries in tough environments."
         defense="5"
         level="3"
         type="equip-neck"
@@ -1049,7 +1049,7 @@ Colors for dyeable equipments or items are now set up by itemcolors.xml.
     <item id="4000"
         image="usable/piouegg.png"
         name="Piou egg"
-        description="Piou egg"
+        description="Piou egg. Not for omelettes!"
         type="generic"
         useButton="Hatch"
     />
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