From dbd2ea1bb30c0bf051411bb2a24e56d633c8c029 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Pihro Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2012 14:40:11 -0500 Subject: Fixed Grammar/Dialogue issues in the Blue Sage Quest --- world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt index 6018f4e6..6b768759 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt @@ -13,17 +13,17 @@ if (@slimes > 0) goto L_Progress; mes "[Nea]"; - mes "\"Oh, hello. If I were you I wouldn't go deeper into the library. There are still some of those monsters left. Slipping around between the bookshelves.\""; + mes "\"Oh, hello. If I were you I wouldn't go deeper into the library. There are still some of those monsters left. Slipping between the bookshelves.\""; mes "She shudders."; next; mes "[Nea]"; - mes "\"And they can explode! Nothing in the world could make go there. I'll do my work just right here, clean the floor and tidy up the books, while I keep my eyes open if they get over here.\""; + mes "\"And they can explode! Nothing in the world could make go there. I'll just do my work right here, clean the floor and tidy up the books, and I keep my eyes open in case they get over here.\""; goto L_Investigate; L_Progress: mes "[Nea]"; - mes "\"Oh, I'm so glad you're taking care about this scary slimes. You're so brave!"; - mes "How much of the are still left, what do you think? Will it be secure to go there soon?\""; + mes "\"Oh, I'm so glad you're taking care about those scary slimes. You're so brave!"; + mes "How many of them are still left, do you think? Will it be safe to go there soon?\""; goto L_Investigate; L_Thank: @@ -44,25 +44,25 @@ L_Ask_Visitor: L_Ask_Helper: menu - "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper, + "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper, "See you later.",L_Close; L_Ask_Both: menu "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor, - "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper, + "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper, "Bye.",L_Close; L_Visitor: mes "[Nea]"; - mes "\"With a mask? Mh, I think I know who are you talking about, I remember vaguely that there was someone with a mask... but I can't recall any details, I didn't really pay attention.\""; + mes "\"With a mask? Mh, I think I know who are you talking about, I vaguely remember that there was someone with a mask... but I can't recall any details, I wasn't really paying attention.\""; goto L_Close; L_Helper: mes "[Nea]"; - mes "\"Peetu? Yeah, he's that kind of person who always wants to do things perfectly. That makes him a bit wearisome to work with him, since he has as high expectations to everyone else as he has to himself.\""; + mes "\"Peetu? Yeah, he's the kind of person who always wants to do things perfectly. That makes it a bit difficult to work with him, since his expectations for others are as high as for himself.\""; next; - mes "\"I really wonder how that accident with the sealing spell could've happened. I'd have never expected him to mess up something like that.\""; + mes "\"I really wonder how that accident with the sealing spell could've happened. I'd had never expected him to mess something up like that.\""; if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7)) goto L_Close; set @investigate, @investigate + 3; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50