From 839210b8ce57f3a3b01b9d2e843e7a6153c6fcda Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jessica Tölke Date: Sat, 21 Jan 2012 20:16:04 +0100 Subject: Barbarians quests: dialogue polishing. --- world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt | 27 ++++++++++++--------------- 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt b/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt index 791d2c4d..c0e159e3 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/033-1/birrod.txt @@ -15,16 +15,15 @@ if (@state == 1) goto L_Fluffy; mes "[Barbarian]"; - mes "\"Welcome. My name is Birrod, warrior of the Mangarr.\""; - next; - mes "\"We usually live high up in the snowy mountains, but we need to solve a problem, so we came down here.\""; + mes "\"Welcome. My name is Birrod, warrior of the Mangarr."; + mes "We usually live high up in the snowy mountains, but we need to solve a problem, so we came down here.\""; next; mes "\"But this shouldn't concern you.\""; goto L_Close; L_Fluffy: mes "[Birrod]"; - mes "\"Kimarr asked you to perform the fluffy hunting? I'm curious how you're going to do it.\""; + mes "\"Kimarr asked you to perform the Fluffy hunting? I'm curious how you're going to do it.\""; mes "He grins."; goto L_Close; @@ -41,12 +40,12 @@ L_Hunting: mes "[Birrod]"; mes "\"Hello, " + strcharinfo(0) + "! Would you like to prove your hunting skills again?\""; next; - mes "\"I noticed some groups of wolverns in the forest west of here which are unusually aggressive."; + mes "\"I noticed some groups of Wolverns in the forest west of here which are unusually aggressive."; mes "This makes it dangerous for all the small people from the town nearby to go there.\""; next; - mes "\"To prove your skills, go to the forest and hunt down " + $@Q_Barbarians_wolvern_amount + " of the very aggressive wolverns.\""; + mes "\"To prove your skills, go to the forest and hunt down " + $@Q_Barbarians_wolvern_amount + " of the very aggressive Wolverns.\""; next; - mes "\"There are also some wolverns that behave normally and attack you only when you come too close to them."; + mes "\"There are also some Wolverns that behave normally and attack you only when you come too close to them."; mes "Those are not the ones I mean, but those that seek the battle themselves.\""; set @state, 4; callsub S_Update_Mask; @@ -68,16 +67,18 @@ L_Wolverns_Done: set wolvern_count, 0; mes "[Birrod]"; mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + "!"; - mes "Good work. Now this area is much safer.\""; + mes "Good work. This area is much safer now.\""; next; getexp @wolvern_exp, 0; - if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) goto L_Not_Ready; + if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) + goto L_Not_Ready; mes "\"Your skills are impressing. You are worthy to be called a warrior of the Mangarr, if you accept.\""; next; goto L_Questions; L_Questions: - if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) goto L_Not_Ready; + if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) + goto L_Not_Ready; mes "Birrod has a very ceremonial look on his face."; mes "[Birrod]"; mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", are you ready to become a full-fledged member of our tribe, the Mangarr?\""; @@ -206,13 +207,9 @@ L_Impressed: mes "\"I'm very proud of you being a member of the tribe.\""; goto L_Close; -L_No_Items: - mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", remember that a member of our tribe is candid and honest.\""; - goto L_Close; - L_Not_Ready: mes "[Birrod]"; - mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", you've shown that you have great hunting skills and are an enrichment to our tribe."; + mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", you've shown great hunting skills and are an enrichment to our tribe."; mes "But you still lack the needed mental skills to become a full member of our tribe.\""; next; mes "\"Roam this world to find more experienced persons than yourself to learn new things."; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2