From 9bf115afded2f22a06c99e22a1f864b5c97d83ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Vreality Date: Mon, 5 May 2014 06:49:13 -0500 Subject: Dialogue changes to NPCs Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf." Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog Improved grammar and wording Replaced ". " with ". " Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – "). MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- world/map/npc/001-1/guards.txt | 32 ++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/001-1/guards.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/guards.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/guards.txt index 1c783f67..9be261d0 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/guards.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/guards.txt @@ -3,10 +3,10 @@ 001-1.gat,48,79,0|script|Ekinu|104, { mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"What a disaster... I can't believe that we managed to rebuild the town so fast, though.\""; + mes "\"What a disaster... I can't believe that we managed to rebuild the town so quickly.\""; next; menu "Can you give me any tips?", L_Tip, - "Do you have information?", L_Info, + "Do you have any information?", L_Info, "What disaster?", L_disaster; L_Tip: @@ -21,27 +21,27 @@ L_Tip: L_1: mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"Try to carry spare food when on fields or in dungeons, they will come in handy. I always take beer, but don't tell the Sergeant...\""; + mes "\"Try to carry spare food when on quests or in dungeons – they will come in handy. I always take beer, but don't tell the Sergeant...\""; goto L_Close; L_2: mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"Always carry a map of where you are, ask the Guides in most towns to get one.\""; + mes "\"If you ever get lost, check your map to get your bearings and figure out where you need to go.\""; goto L_Close; L_3: mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"When in a dungeon, monsters are more aggressive than if they were outside.\""; + mes "\"When in a dungeon, monsters are more aggressive – and often more powerful – than if they were outside.\""; goto L_Close; L_4: mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"When gambling for money in casinos, make sure you have enough emergency money.\""; + mes "\"When gambling in casinos, make sure to not bet too much or you might become broke.\""; goto L_Close; L_5: mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"Never underestimate the enemy.\""; + mes "\"Never underestimate your enemy.\""; goto L_Close; L_6: @@ -51,23 +51,23 @@ L_6: L_0: mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"Let me think of something... Oh! Do NOT attack Red scorpions unless you can kill it for sure!\""; + mes "\"Let me think of something... Oh! Do NOT attack the red or black scorpions unless you're sure you can kill it!\""; goto L_Close; L_Info: mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"Everyone wants information... you won't get it, at least not here. I'm not even sure what you mean, to be honest.\""; + mes "\"Everyone seems to want information... You won't get it – at least not here. I'm not even sure what you mean, to be honest.\""; goto L_Close; L_disaster: mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"What do you mean, `what disaster'? Weren't you there? That huge huge volcano ex...rusion... whatever they call it, and the earthquake!\""; + mes "\"What do you mean, 'what disaster?' Weren't you there? That huge volcano ex...rusion... – whatever they call it – and then the earthquake!\""; next; mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"Half the town was reduced to rubble! Somehow, no-one was seriously injured though, so I guess we were lucky...\""; + mes "\"Half the town was reduced to rubble! Somehow, no one was seriously injured, so I guess we were lucky...\""; next; mes "[Ekinu the Town Guard]"; - mes "\"Well, the mayor rebuilt everything quickly, but I have no idea where he got the GP from...\""; + mes "\"Well, the mayor rebuilt everything quickly, but I still have no idea where he got all the GP from...\""; goto L_Close; L_Close: @@ -80,17 +80,17 @@ L_Close: if (getskilllv(SKILL_MAGIC)) goto L_message; mes "[Ryan the Town Guard]"; - mes "ZzzZzzZ..."; + mes "Zzzz... Zzzz..."; next; mes "[Ryan the Town Guard]"; mes "\"Hmmmmmmh...?"; - mes "Oh, I wasn't sleeping, I was just resting my eyes!\""; + mes "Oh, what? I wasn't sleeping! I was just resting my eyes!\""; close; L_message: mes "[Ryan the Town Guard]"; - mes "\" Watch out for Black Scorpions. They are extremely dangerous.\""; + mes "\" Watch out for Black Scorpions. They are extremely dangerous!\""; next; - mes "\"Whenever one approaches the town gate, Ekinu has me run shouting '" + getspellinvocation("aggravate") + "'. Somehow this distracts it so Ekinu can kill it.\""; + mes "\"Whenever one approaches the town gate, Ekinu has me run around shouting '" + getspellinvocation("aggravate") + ".' Somehow, this distracts it so Ekinu can kill it.\""; close; } -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2