From b87992db63a4b3f16b834e42ffa0d11594384595 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: TheKandiman Date: Thu, 24 Feb 2011 22:06:26 -0500 Subject: gy inn: basic dialog for barman, minor spelling/grammar updates --- npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt') diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt index 82a842b8..7c3b3465 100644 --- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt +++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt @@ -39,10 +39,10 @@ L_intro: next; mes "\"*Sniffle*\""; next; - mes "You bend your knees near the child, trying to gain his confidence and ask why he is crying. But looking close, you are surprised to see that his skin color is an awful cadaveric grey..."; + mes "You bend your knees near the child, trying to gain his confidence and ask why he is crying. But looking closely, you are surprised to see that his skin color is an awful cadaveric grey..."; menu "Calm down kid, what happened?",-, - "Leave the kid alone",L_close; + "Leave the kid alone.",L_close; mes "[Crying Child]"; mes "\"Oh, what? Who are you "+@madamsir$+", what are you doing here?\""; next; @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ L_intro: next; mes "\"I don't know what happened. I was in this room and... I heard some very loud noises, people screaming, cracking sounds... and a smell, a terrible smell, like something rotten. And then I can't remember anything else!\""; next; - mes "\"I think it was something very bad, because, after all that, I woke up the way I am now and the blue beetle was lost. Oh, and my parents acting like they are not themselves. I don't know what happened, maybe it was my fault... I shoudn't have played with that... *sniffle*... \""; + mes "\"I think it was something very bad, because, after all that, I woke up the way I am now and the blue beetle was lost. Oh, and my parents are acting like they are not themselves. I don't know what happened, maybe it was my fault... I shouldn't have played with that... *sniffle*... \""; next; menu "Don't worry, I will look around. Maybe I can find it for you...",-, -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2