From 7980c2f90edaa16ebb6bf16b805cb6a84acc3e8b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Sini Ruohomaa Date: Sat, 21 Aug 2010 13:00:14 +0300 Subject: Minor language polish. --- npc/001-1_Tulimshar/mikhail.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/001-1_Tulimshar/mikhail.txt') diff --git a/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/mikhail.txt b/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/mikhail.txt index 6946f7f5..5a969f28 100755 --- a/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/mikhail.txt +++ b/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/mikhail.txt @@ -11,12 +11,12 @@ L_Start: mes "[Mikhail]"; - mes "\"My grandma sent me to get five maggot slimes from the maggots in the desert, but they scare me so bad!\""; + mes "\"My grandma sent me to get five [Maggot Slime]s from the maggots in the desert, but they scare me so bad!\""; next; mes "\"You look like a nice person. Would you go get them for me?\""; menu - "Of course, I'll go get you that.", L_accept, - "I got other things to do right now.", L_close; + "Of course, I'll go get them for you.", L_accept, + "I've got other things to do right now.", L_close; close; L_close: @@ -30,11 +30,11 @@ L_accept: L_Progress: mes "[Mikhail]"; - mes "\"Did you bring me the five maggot slimes i need?\""; + mes "\"Did you bring me the five [Maggot Slime]s i need?\""; next; menu - "Yes, here they are boy!", L_try, - "Not yet, I'll be back soon.", L_close; + "Yes, here they are, kiddo!", L_try, + "Not yet, but I'll be back soon.", L_close; close; L_try: @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ L_get: delitem "MaggotSlime", 5; set TMW_Quest, 6; mes "[Mikhail]"; - mes "\"Thank you so much! I can get back to my grandma now!\""; + mes "\"Ooh! Thank you so much! I can get back to my grandma now!\""; next; getexp 100, 0; mes "You get 100 xp."; @@ -55,6 +55,6 @@ L_get: L_Done: mes "[Mikhail]"; - mes "\"Thanks for helping me getting those maggot slimes!\""; + mes "\"Thanks again for helping me get those [Maggot Slime]s!\""; close; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2