From 6abaef4376959cc33b0e8f11809a8717b722c7a1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ledmitz <69915785+Ledmitz@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Tue, 8 Sep 2020 11:58:21 +0000
Subject: Edits to alacrius.txt (#564)

Improve some of Alacrius' riddle speech
by Ledmitz
---
 world/map/npc/027-2/alacrius.txt | 20 ++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/world/map/npc/027-2/alacrius.txt b/world/map/npc/027-2/alacrius.txt
index 3196e43e..b994b18a 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/027-2/alacrius.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/027-2/alacrius.txt
@@ -20,20 +20,20 @@ L_Quest:
     next;
     mes "##1--------- The Alacrius Riddle";
     mes "";
-    mes "A few spells in the right place and order,";
+    mes "A spell used in the right place and order,";
     mes "will break Keshlam's magical border,";
     mes "but be very aware of a warder.";
     next;
     mes "Also know, my oh so dear friends,";
-    mes "the clues differs for whoever attends.";
-    mes "If one fails or succeeds depends,";
+    mes "the clues differ for whoever attends.";
+    mes "If one will fail or succeed depends,";
     mes "on how close attention one spends!";
     next;
-    mes "##9 Explore the Crypt, and find the clues to solve Alacrius' Riddle.";
-    mes "##9 All clues, hints, and riddles you need to solve this one,";
+    mes "##9 Explore the Crypt and find the clues to solve Alacrius' Riddle.";
+    mes "##9 All clues, hints and riddles you need to solve this one,";
     mes "##9 are inside this crypt. If a clue, hint, or riddle, doesn't make";
-    mes "##9 immediate sense, together, they shall lend you their full meaning;";
-    mes "##9 And if you're in despair, find the Lord words, they will guide your way.";
+    mes "##9 immediate sense, together, they shall lend you their full meaning.";
+    //mes "##9 And if you're in despair, find the Lord words, they will guide your way.";
     close;
 }
 
@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ L_Quest:
     mes "for those who fell victim to his doom.";
     mes "";
     mes "Candles will part the left from the right";
-    mes "and the stone sarcophagi hold a clue to the rite.";
+    mes "and the stone sarcophagi hold clues to the rite.";
     mes "But only the ones that are still sealed tight,";
-    mes "might tell you which candles you have to light.";
+    mes "will tell you which candles you have to light.";
     mes "";
     mes "And watch out for the five heroes,";
     mes "For the lord's words of wisdom,";
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ L_Empty:
     mes "to Terogan's vault of foul play.";
     mes "";
     mes "A cite on their left or right";
-    mes "holds some clues to the abysmal rite,";
+    mes "holds the key to the abysmal rite,";
     mes "that opens the path to an unspeakable site.";
     mes "Do you know which candles to light?";
     close;
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