From aa95156a353ca3794a68f67fd5131e30608eb004 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: The Kandiman Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2011 01:28:16 -0400 Subject: Minor spelling/grammar/punctuation updates. Rossy quest and July news entry --- world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt b/world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt index 5d1d1ad7..bc3c9f27 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ L_Help: "I'm not lost and I don't need help, bye.", L_No; next; mes "[Clauquer]"; - mes "\"How do I know you're looking for her? Well, because I saw her. I also heard her, she screamed and still screams like hell. Moreover, I don't think you would enter these caves just for fun!\""; + mes "\"How do I know you're looking for her? Well, because I saw her. I also heard her. She screamed, and still screams like hell. Moreover, I don't think you would enter these caves just for fun!\""; menu "Of course not.", -; next; @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ L_Help: "Please go on.", -; L_Advice: mes "[Clauquer]"; - mes "\"I advise you to be mentally prepared for this rescue operation. A fey nature spirit creature kidnapped the little girl and is planning to replace her with a changeling.\""; + mes "\"I advise you to be mentally prepared for this rescue operation. A fey nature spirit kidnapped the little girl and is planning to replace her with a changeling.\""; next; mes "\"The old tales of Hurnscald say this spirit always exchanges his offspring with beautiful and smart human children, to use them as servants. And his offspring usually forget about their own origin, growing up in a human family. But they are usually 'people' with really bad tempers, the kind of people who do terrible things in this world...\""; next; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2