From 8ef0339e829bb071f13ebee95ecfe8faf0183844 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: The Kandiman Date: Sat, 26 Mar 2011 21:30:33 -0400 Subject: More spelling and grammar corrections. --- npc/009-2_Hurnscald/alan.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/009-2_Hurnscald/alan.txt') diff --git a/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/alan.txt b/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/alan.txt index ea00fe31..f19990d9 100644 --- a/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/alan.txt +++ b/npc/009-2_Hurnscald/alan.txt @@ -25,12 +25,12 @@ next; if (Inspector == 1) menu - "OK, thanks", -, + "OK, thanks.", -, "Can you make me a really good bow?", L_State_0_1, "Have you seen anything strange recently that might be connected to the robberies?", L_NohMask_Answer; if (Inspector != 1) menu - "OK, thanks", -, + "OK, thanks.", -, "Can you make me a really good bow?", L_State_0_1; close; @@ -78,12 +78,12 @@ L_State_1: next; if (Inspector == 1) menu - "No, I haven't had the time yet", -, + "No, I haven't had the time yet.", -, "No, I didn't find him yet.", L_State_1_1, "Have you seen anything strange recently that might be connected to the robberies?", L_NohMask_Answer; if (Inspector != 1) menu - "No, I haven't had the time yet", -, + "No, I haven't had the time yet.", -, "No, I didn't find him yet.", L_State_1_1; close; @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ L_State_3_try: next; set @Temp1, rand(20); if (@Temp1 == 0) goto L_State_3_success; - mes "The log breaks with a loud crack"; + mes "The log breaks with a loud crack."; next; mes "[Alan]"; mes "\"Sorry, this log was too weak for one of my forest bows. Now it is junk. Give me another.\""; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2