From b6d55a492b58f6d57e6f94eaacab98cb1e0e97fe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: The Kandiman Date: Thu, 8 Dec 2011 23:26:56 -0500 Subject: Minor spelling and grammar corrections for Christmas event. --- world/map/npc/xmas/2011/leatherBall.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/xmas/2011/leatherBall.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/leatherBall.txt b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/leatherBall.txt index 9a8bf5cd..b6e5b080 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/leatherBall.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/leatherBall.txt @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ L_Helping: mes "[Tarmo]"; - mes "\"Mh? Oh, are you new? Well, but I suppose it's a good idea to hire more helpers."; + mes "\"Mh? Oh, are you new? Well, I suppose it's a good idea to hire more helpers."; mes "Listen, I have this ordering form. Can you bring it to Iivo for me?\""; set @ball, 1; set xmas11, (xmas11 & ~($@xmas11_BallMask) | (@ball << $@xmas11_BallShift)); @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ L_Helping: "What is it?",-; mes "[Tarmo]"; mes "\"The form? It's an order for a toy. We have a shortage on material this year. Some things went wrong with the delivery of it."; - mes "That's why we produce only explicitly ordered toys this year.\""; + mes "That's why we are producing only explicitly ordered toys this year.\""; goto L_Close; L_Ordered: @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ L_NoEvent: L_RewardTime: mes "[Tarmo]"; - mes "\"Given all the misfortunes we did a pretty good job I think.\""; + mes "\"Given all the misfortunes, we did a pretty good job I think.\""; goto L_Close; L_Close: @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ L_LeatherBall: mes "You get distracted and start daydreaming."; mes "[Iivo]"; mes "\"Alright! Now the impregnation.\""; - mes "You startle."; + mes "You startle out of your daydream as he speaks."; next; mes "Iivo mixes the maggot slimes with some other ingredients you can't exactly identify and rubs the ball with it."; mes "[Iivo]"; @@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ L_NoEvent: L_RewardTime: mes "[Iivo]"; - mes "\"This year's Christmas prepations really were chaotic. I hope we'll do better next year.\""; + mes "\"This year's Christmas preparations really were chaotic. I hope we'll do better next year.\""; goto L_Close; L_NoItems: -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2