From dbd2ea1bb30c0bf051411bb2a24e56d633c8c029 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Pihro Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2012 14:40:11 -0500 Subject: Fixed Grammar/Dialogue issues in the Blue Sage Quest --- world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt index 805d8a5e..8ded86ff 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt @@ -19,13 +19,13 @@ L_Quest: mes "[Santeri]"; - mes "\"Welcome. Are you an adventurer? I could need some help.\""; + mes "\"Welcome. Are you an adventurer? I could use some help.\""; menu "I am. What heroic action is needed?",-, "How can I help?",-, "I'm not interested.",L_Close; mes "[Santeri]"; - mes "\"You see, we're working on repairing all the damaged books and creating new ones for those that are lost."; + mes "\"You see, we're working on repairing all of the damaged books and creating new ones for those that are lost."; mes "Therefore we need a lot of glue, but our supplies are nearly used up. I need " + @claw_amount + " Yeti Claws as ingredient to make new glue. Do you have that?\""; menu "Yes, here you go.",-, @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ L_Quest: L_Done: mes "[Santeri]"; - mes "\"Thanks to you our glue supply is replenished and we can repair those books.\""; + mes "\"Thanks to you, our glue supply is replenished and we can repair those books.\""; goto L_Investigate; L_NoItem: @@ -63,13 +63,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor: L_Ask_Helper: menu - "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper, + "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper, "See you later.",L_Close; L_Ask_Both: menu "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor, - "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper, + "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper, "Bye.",L_Close; L_Visitor: @@ -79,9 +79,9 @@ L_Visitor: L_Helper: mes "[Santeri]"; - mes "\"Oh, that's an interesting question. I was really surpised when I heard that he was responsible for the sealing spell. I've worked together with him once in a while, and I have to say, it really was a pleasure. He's very accurate and diligent, but also polite and helpful.\""; + mes "\"Oh, that's an interesting question. I was really surpised when I heard that he was responsible for the sealing spell. I've worked together with him before, and I have to say, it really was a pleasure. He's very accurate and diligent, but also polite and helpful.\""; next; - mes "\"I really wonder what went wrong with that sealing spell, I can't imagine Peetu messing up something such important.\""; + mes "\"I really wonder what went wrong with that sealing spell, I can't imagine Peetu messing up something so important.\""; if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7)) goto L_Close; set @investigate, @investigate + 3; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50