From 9bf115afded2f22a06c99e22a1f864b5c97d83ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Vreality Date: Mon, 5 May 2014 06:49:13 -0500 Subject: Dialogue changes to NPCs Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf." Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog Improved grammar and wording Replaced ". " with ". " Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – "). MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- world/map/npc/024-1/ched.txt | 4 ++-- world/map/npc/024-1/tondar.txt | 8 ++++---- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/024-1') diff --git a/world/map/npc/024-1/ched.txt b/world/map/npc/024-1/ched.txt index c414cce5..6e82b58b 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/024-1/ched.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/024-1/ched.txt @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if (isin("024-1.gat", 66, 43, 80, 54)) goto L_Canyon; mes "[Ched]"; - mes "\"I'm trying to get a spell to work. It's supposed to combine two potions, but I can't seem to figure out which two those are...\""; + mes "\"I'm trying to get a spell to work. It's supposed to combine two potions, but I can't seem to figure out which two those are...\""; next; menu "Well, good luck with that!", L_Done, @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ L_Next: mes "\"Well, I don't know what it's called... I took it out of `Timbleweed's Advanced Transmutations.' It seems awfully hard to cast, somehow.\""; next; mes "[Ched]"; - mes "\"Well, the invocation is `" + getspellinvocation("merge-concentration-potions") + "'. You're supposed to just hold up the potions and cast it, and then they're supposed to merge.\""; + mes "\"Well, the invocation is `" + getspellinvocation("merge-concentration-potions") + "'. You're supposed to just hold up the potions and cast it, and then they're supposed to merge.\""; next; mes "[Ched]"; mes "\"Maybe I should go back to `detect magic' until I can cast that one properly.\""; diff --git a/world/map/npc/024-1/tondar.txt b/world/map/npc/024-1/tondar.txt index 21957807..462ddc25 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/024-1/tondar.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/024-1/tondar.txt @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ L_may_ask: L_library: mes "[Tondar]"; - mes "\"Of course we do. It is only for graduate students, alumni, and faculty.\""; + mes "\"Of course we do. It is only for graduate students, alumni, and faculty.\""; next; menu "Thank you, and goodbye.", L_end, @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ L_library: L_Next: mes "[Tondar]"; - mes "\"Well, it is possible to get a special permit from the headmaster. But he is currently on sabbatical.\""; + mes "\"Well, it is possible to get a special permit from the headmaster. But he is currently on sabbatical.\""; close; L_askspell: @@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ L_askspell: L_spell: mes "[Tondar]"; - mes "\"Well, all right; this one can't do much harm. Press your hands together and say `" + getspellinvocation("ask-magic-exp") + "'.\""; - mes "\"This will release a steady flow of magic within you. Focus and try to control it; it is a good meditative practice.\""; + mes "\"Well, all right; this one can't do much harm. Press your hands together and say `" + getspellinvocation("ask-magic-exp") + "'.\""; + mes "\"This will release a steady flow of magic within you. Focus and try to control it; it is a good meditative practice.\""; close; L_nopay: -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2