From 9bf115afded2f22a06c99e22a1f864b5c97d83ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Vreality Date: Mon, 5 May 2014 06:49:13 -0500 Subject: Dialogue changes to NPCs Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf." Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog Improved grammar and wording Replaced ". " with ". " Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – "). MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- world/map/npc/022-1/npcs.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/022-1/npcs.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/022-1/npcs.txt b/world/map/npc/022-1/npcs.txt index 8ce2eab9..dbbc8784 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/022-1/npcs.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/022-1/npcs.txt @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ L_Marikel_2: mes "[" + @npcname$ + "]"; mes "\"Yeah, killing monsters may pay well, but I'd need more hazard pay than a tower mason to hunt monsters.\""; next; - mes "\"I'll just play safe and stick to putting our stock away. Be careful, the monsters outside the city can be dangerous.\""; + mes "\"I'll just play safe and stick to putting our stock away. Be careful, the monsters outside the city can be dangerous.\""; next; mes "\"The Sandstorm mine, just South of Tulimshar, is blocked from most but miners, soldiers and seasoned monster slayers.\""; close; @@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ L_Marikel_2: set @npcname$, "Joelin"; mes "[" + @npcname$ + "]"; - mes "\"My ship's to set sail soon. We'll tour around the Acean Isles, then back around to Argaes, then here in Tonori.\""; + mes "\"My ship's to set sail soon. We'll tour around the Acean Isles, then back around to Argaes, then here in Tonori.\""; next; - mes "\"Tulimshar's Fleets also are sending exploration teams to build a dock in Nivalis on Kaizei, which I'm not really hoping for. It's cold up there!\""; + mes "\"Tulimshar's Fleets also are sending exploration teams to build a dock in Nivalis on Kaizei, which I'm not really hoping for. It's cold up there!\""; close; } @@ -52,6 +52,6 @@ L_Marikel_2: set @npcname$, "Swezanne"; mes "[" + @npcname$ + "]"; - mes "\"Just through those gates is Northern Tulimshar. In Southern Tulimshar I go to the Bazaar and talk with Aidan about monster points.\""; + mes "\"Just through those gates is Northern Tulimshar. In Southern Tulimshar I go to the Bazaar and talk with Aidan about monster points.\""; close; } -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50