From 9339134ec5355ece3fed7e85c61d639864f07f35 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jessica Tölke Date: Tue, 28 Aug 2012 20:02:45 +0200 Subject: Some minor dialogue fixes on Lora Tay and Agostine. --- world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt | 56 ++++++++++++++++++++++------------------- 1 file changed, 30 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/010-2') diff --git a/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt b/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt index 7485b70a..6335d7a7 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/010-2/loratay.txt @@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ L_give_water: mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"If HE can sew petty every-day items for ordinary peasants, then so can I. Very well, is there anything in particular that you need made? I shall show you how a proper seamstress operates!\""; next; - + if (QUEST_WG_state == 12) goto L_main_menu2; goto L_main_menu; @@ -256,26 +256,26 @@ L_agostine_proposal: mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"What kind of proposal are you asking of me?\""; next; - + menu "I have talked to Agostine and he needs your help.", -, "I forgot...", L_main_menu2; - + mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"That cheat! What could he possibly want from me?"; - mes "We dont even have the same style in seeming. Is this a joke?\""; + mes "We don't even have the same style in seeming. Is this a joke?\""; next; - + menu - "It's no joke. he needs your help in creating a new fashion!", -, - "yeah you are right, he was probably joking.", L_end; - + "It's no joke. He needs your help in creating a new fashion!", -, + "Yeah you're right, he was probably joking.", L_end; + mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"Well it depends what he wants from me."; mes "Go see Agostine, ask him what he's planning and I will think about it.\""; - + set QUEST_WG_state, 13; - + close; L_proposal_intro: @@ -292,25 +292,25 @@ L_proposal_show_materials: menu "Yes, he explained he saw a dress in a dream and gave me these materials.", -, "No, that guy is a total wacko.", L_end; - + mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"Wow these are such fine materials!"; mes "These are certainly not for just any ordinary clothes..."; mes "He must be thinking of something magnificent.\""; next; - + menu "He said this dress would be his first dress creation and he wanted it to be fabulous!", -; - + mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"Fine I will accept his offer..."; mes "But the materials he has given you need some sewing on the edges.\""; next; mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; - mes "\"I will fix them, but I cannot use normal threading to fix this material."; - mes "I will need a soft thin thread so I wont spoil the textures.\""; + mes "\"I will fix them, but I cannot use normal threading to fix this materials."; + mes "I will need a soft thin thread so I won't spoil the textures.\""; next; - + goto L_proposal_search_items; L_proposal_search_items: @@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ L_proposal_search_items: mes "\"Please bring me " + @FINEDRESS_COCOONS + " silk cocoons."; mes "This should cover the materials needs and will leave extra for sewing the pieces together later on.\""; next; - + menu "I will go get them right away!", -, "Here you are.", L_proposal_give_items, @@ -336,7 +336,7 @@ L_proposal_give_items: goto L_proposal_not_enough_items; delitem "SilkCocoon", @FINEDRESS_COCOONS; set QUEST_WG_state, 16; - + mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"Great, now I can spin the silk threading and fix this mess made of these fine materials."; mes "While I do this, you will need to go get the design drawings from Agostine..."; @@ -349,7 +349,8 @@ L_proposal_retrieve_design: mes "\"May you go retrieve the design from Agostine?\""; next; menu - "Certainly I'll be back soon!", -; + "Certainly I'll be back soon!", -, + "Actually I want something else...", L_main_menu; close; L_proposal_bringing_design: @@ -358,7 +359,7 @@ L_proposal_bringing_design: next; menu "Here they are!", -; - + mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"Wonderful, this dress design is magnificent!"; mes "I am done with the threading but I will now need to sew these materials together into the design.\""; @@ -376,29 +377,32 @@ L_proposal_dress_finished: mes "\"Well it was difficult seeming with such fragile materials."; mes "But I have done it. The design is finished except for one part of it.\""; next; - + menu "Wow it looks great, but what's missing?", -; - + mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"Well there are white flare designs on the bottom of the dress."; mes "I'm not great with fine cloth design so this might be something Agostine must do on his own."; next; - + mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"Please take the unfinished dress to him so he may finish the edges with the cloth.\""; next; - + menu "Okay, can't wait to see the finished product! Thanks for your help!", -; - + set QUEST_WG_state, 20; - + close; L_proposal_deliver_dress: mes "[Lora Tay the Seamstress]"; mes "\"Please take the unfinished dress to him so he may finish the edges with the cloth.\""; + menu + "I'm on my way.", -, + "I have a request...", L_main_menu; close; L_desert_hat: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50