From cf1e6f3b813501502c1f59ef86fe44791c3f7b1c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Shad0wCrux Date: Tue, 12 Jan 2016 17:48:22 -0500 Subject: Minor edit for clarity --- world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/009-2') diff --git a/world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt b/world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt index 17f6bc61..57552a53 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ L_make_manapotion: next; mes "[Wyara the Witch]"; mes "The water in the bottle takes on a strange golden hue, but doesn't flow out."; - mes "After a while, she retrieves the bottle, fills some of the liquid into a smaller, clay bottle, mixes in the rest of the paste, plugs the bottle and shakes it."; + mes "After a while, she retrieves the bottle and fills some of the liquid into a smaller clay bottle. She then proceeds to mix in the rest of the paste, plugs the bottle and shakes it."; next; mes "[Wyara the Witch]"; mes "\"I shall keep the rest of your water and the bottle as a payment, if you don't mind. But here is the potion; let it rest for a minute before you use it for maximum effect.\""; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2 From e70a91ab12e2793ff30e244a5493113578412ccf Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: wushin Date: Mon, 1 Feb 2016 13:58:25 -0600 Subject: added better wording. closes #448 --- world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/009-2') diff --git a/world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt b/world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt index 57552a53..99ad3681 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/009-2/wyara.txt @@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ L_make_manapotion: next; mes "[Wyara the Witch]"; mes "The water in the bottle takes on a strange golden hue, but doesn't flow out."; - mes "After a while, she retrieves the bottle and fills some of the liquid into a smaller clay bottle. She then proceeds to mix in the rest of the paste, plugs the bottle and shakes it."; + mes "After a while, she retrieves the bottle and pours some of the liquid into a smaller clay bottle. She proceeds to mix in the rest of the paste, then plugs the bottle and shakes it."; next; mes "[Wyara the Witch]"; mes "\"I shall keep the rest of your water and the bottle as a payment, if you don't mind. But here is the potion; let it rest for a minute before you use it for maximum effect.\""; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2