From 364f6111306eb4fcdd8edc98dae1ae0727dba712 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Nick Ashley Date: Sun, 12 Apr 2015 09:22:38 -0400 Subject: Various dialog fixes in Tulim viz., the Kylian quest, the tombstones, and various other NPCs --- world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt | 103 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------------- 1 file changed, 54 insertions(+), 49 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt b/world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt index b1dadac2..346fcffa 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/002-2/kylian.txt @@ -102,62 +102,65 @@ OnInit: if (@state >= 1) goto L_Suitcase; mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Ah, are you the room service? I've some requests.\""; + mes "\"Ah! Are you the room service? I've some requests.\""; menu - "Sure, what can I do for you?",L_Luggage, - "No, I'm not!",L_Next; + "Sure... What can I do for you?",L_Luggage, + "No I'm not!",L_Next; L_Next: mes "[Kylian]"; mes "\"Too bad. Would you be interested in earning some quick money with some errands regardless?\""; menu - "I'm a great adventurer! I don't do errands.",L_Close, - "No, I'm busy.",L_Close, - "Mh, ok.",L_Luggage; + "I'm a great adventurer! I don't do petty errands.",L_Close, + "No. I'm busy.",L_Close, + "Well... OK.",L_Luggage; L_Luggage: mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I need someone to get my luggage from the docks. Show this paper to the sailor who's watching the luggage.\""; - mes "He gives you his ticket which you store in your pocket, separated from your inventory."; + mes "\"I need you to get my luggage from the docks. Just show this paper to the sailor who's watching the luggage.\""; + mes "He gives you his ticket, which you promptly store in a safe pocket outside of your inventory."; set @state, 1; callfunc "SetKylianQuest"; goto L_Close; L_Suitcase: // @state >= 1, but below 3 mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Did you already get my luggage from the docks?\""; + mes "\"Did you get my luggage from the docks?\""; if (@state != 2) goto L_Close; menu "Here it is.",L_Continue, - "I'm on my way, don't worry.",L_Close; + "Don't worry; I'm on my way.",L_Close; L_Continue: if (countitem("LeatherSuitcase") < 1) goto L_NoItem; delitem "LeatherSuitcase", 1; set Zeny, Zeny + @suitcase_money; + getitem "Acorn", @acorn_amount; getexp @suitcase_exp, 0; set @state, 3; callfunc "SetKylianQuest"; + next; mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Ah, very good. I really need to have a look at some of my papers in there.\""; + mes "\"Ah! Very good. I have some urgent paperwork that I've been needing to attend to.\""; mes "He gives you some money."; next; mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Oh, and I have some acorns left, I had them with me as travelling fare. You can have them, they're tasty."; - mes "In case you don't like them, you could also bring them to the Tulimshar bakery. I heard they use them to make some special flour.\""; - getitem "Acorn", @acorn_amount; + mes "\"Before you go, I also happen to have some acorns left over from my trip.\""; + mes "\"You can have them if you wish; they're rather tasty.\""; + mes "If, however, you don't like them, you could take them to the Tulimshar bakery. I heard they use them to make a special kind of flour.\""; next; goto L_ShopLicense; L_ShopLicense: // @state == 3 mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I'm a salesman and came to Tulimshar because I'm thinking about establishing a shop here. While I'm going through my papers, could you find out who I have to talk to about opening a shop in this city?\""; + mes "\"I'm a salesman and came to Tulimshar because I'm thinking about establishing a shop here.\""; + mes "\"While I'm going through my papers, could you find out whom I have to talk to about opening up a shop in this city?\""; if (!(QUEST_NorthTulimshar & $@knowYanisNT)) goto L_Close; menu - "You need to talk to Yanis in the government building.",L_GovBuild, + "You need to go and talk to Yanis in the government building.",L_GovBuild, "I'll see what I can do.",L_Close; L_GovBuild: @@ -167,24 +170,24 @@ L_GovBuild: callfunc "SetKylianQuest"; set @KylianNTLicense, 1; mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Ah, excellent. That's very helpful. Could you tell me how to get to that building?\""; - mes "You explain the way to the building."; + mes "\"Ah... excellent! That's very helpful. Could you tell me how to get to that building?\""; + mes "You give him directions to the building."; next; goto L_LicenseDone; L_LicenseDone: // the player didn't log out yet after telling about Yanis mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I need to prepare my papers now. I might have some more questions later.\""; + mes "\"I need to prepare my papers now. I might have some more questions later on though.\""; goto L_Close; L_SightSeeing: // @state == 4 and logged out sometime between getting to that state and now mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"You just came here the right moment. I have finished my business affairs. I think I should use my time here to also get a bit of cultural knowledge about the area. Can you tell me if there are any historical places to visit?\""; + mes "\"You came here at just the right moment! I have finished my business affairs, and I think I should use my time here to learn a bit about the culture in the area. Can you tell me if there are any historical places or landmarks to visit?\""; if (!(QUEST_NorthTulimshar & $@knowWeellosNT)) goto L_Close; menu - "There is a very old historic building not far from here.",L_HistBuild, - "I don't know, but will have a look around.",L_Close; + "There's a very old building not far from here.",L_HistBuild, + "I don't know, but I'll have a look around.",L_Close; L_HistBuild: set Zeny, Zeny + @sightseeing_money; @@ -199,12 +202,12 @@ L_HistBuild: L_Food: // @state == 5 mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"While I'm out, I could also get something to eat. Maybe some typical dish for this region. Do you have a good suggestion for that?\""; + mes "\"While I'm out, I could also get something to eat. Do you have any suggestions for local cuisine?\""; if (@fieri < 4) // didn't yet help Fieri make Tonori Delight goto L_Close; menu - "Fieri at the castle makes great Tonori Delight.",L_SoupBer, - "No idea, I'll try to find out.",L_Close; + "A man named Fieri makes a tasty Tonori Delight over at the castle.",L_SoupBer, + "No idea. I'll try to find out.",L_Close; L_SoupBer: set Zeny, Zeny + @food_money; @@ -216,14 +219,14 @@ L_SoupBer: L_SightSeeingDone: mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I'm going to see the historic building you told me about and try this local food at the castle. Thank you for the suggestions.\""; + mes "\"I'm going to see the historic building you told me about and try the local food at the castle. Thank you for the suggestions.\""; goto L_Close; L_Casino: // @state == 6 and logged out sometime between getting to that state and now mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Hello. I just came back from my sight-seeing tour. And this Tonori Delight really was delicious. I wonder what it's made of...\""; + mes "\"Hello. I just came back from my sight-seeing tour, and this Tonori Delight really was delicious. I wonder what it's made of...\""; next; - mes "\"However, I was wondering if you know about a good place to spend the evening? Some place to have fun?\""; + mes "\"However, I was wondering if you know about some evening attractions. Maybe somewhere to have fun?\""; if (!(QUEST_NorthTulimshar & $@knowCasinoNT)) goto L_Close; menu @@ -236,19 +239,19 @@ L_CasinoFound: set @state, 7; callfunc "SetKylianQuest"; mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Oh, there's a casino in this city? That's a wonderful thing. Where can I find it?\""; + mes "\"Oh! There's a casino in this city? That's wonderful! Where can I find it?\""; mes "You explain how to get to the casino."; next; goto L_Clothes; L_Clothes: // @state == 7 mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I should get proper clothing before I go to the casino tonight. Do you know a reputable shop where clothing of high quality is sold?\""; + mes "\"I should acquire proper clothing before I go to the casino tonight. Do you know a reputable shop where high-quality clothing is sold?\""; if (!(QUEST_NorthTulimshar & $@knowLatoyNT)) goto L_Close; menu - "Latoy's shop. On the west side of Tulimshar.",L_HarborDistrict, - "Mh, I don't know.",L_Close; + "Latoy's shop. It's on the west side of Tulimshar.",L_HarborDistrict, + "Hmmm... I don't know.",L_Close; L_HarborDistrict: set Zeny, Zeny + @clothes_money; @@ -256,23 +259,25 @@ L_HarborDistrict: set @state, 8; callfunc "SetKylianQuest"; set @KylianNTCasino, 1; - mes "You explain about Latoy and the high quality shop."; + mes "You explain about Latoy and the quality of his shop."; + next; mes "[Kylian]"; mes "\"This seems to be exactly what I need. Thanks a lot.\""; goto L_Close; L_CasinoDone: mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I'm looking forward to going to the casino tonight. See me tomorrow.\""; + mes "\"I'm looking forward to going to the casino tonight. See me tomorrow, and I might have more requests.\""; goto L_Close; L_DesertHat: // @state == 8 mes "Kylian looks a bit tired."; + next; mes "[Kylian]"; mes "\"That was an interesting night. Thanks for your suggestion to visit the casino.\""; next; getinventorylist; - mes "\"You helped me a lot, so I bought a souvenir for you while I was shopping.\""; + mes "\"You helped me out a lot, so I bought a souvenir for you while I was out shopping.\""; if ((checkweight("DesertHat", 1) == 0) || (@inventorylist_count == 100)) goto L_Inventory; getitem "DesertHat", 1; @@ -284,33 +289,33 @@ L_DesertHat: // @state == 8 L_Shop: mes "[Kylian]"; mes "\"The Council of Wizards approved my shop license!\""; - mes "\"I purchased a store just acorss the way from the hotel exit.\""; + mes "\"I purchased a store just across the way from the inn.\""; next; - mes "\"If you are looking for work, go see the shop keeper I have working for me.\""; - mes "\"Mention your name and he will know I sent you.\""; + mes "\"If you are looking for work, go see the shop keeper I have working for me there.\""; + mes "\"Mention your name, and he will know I sent you.\""; set @state, 10; callfunc "SetKylianQuest"; goto L_Close; L_OfferedJob: mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I spoke with the shopkeeper, They said you haven't stopped in yet.\""; + mes "\"I spoke with the shopkeeper, and he said you haven't stopped in yet.\""; next; - mes "\"I wish you would consider working for KPS.\""; + mes "\"I wish you would consider working for me.\""; next; - mes "\"KPS needs a well-traveled go getter like you.\""; + mes "\"KPS needs a determined, experienced adventurer like you.\""; goto L_Close; L_Helping: mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I've heard you decided to come work for me. That is great news.\""; - mes "\"Keep up the good work and I might have something a little extra for you.\""; + mes "\"I've heard you decided to come work for me. That's great news!\""; + mes "\"Keep up the good work, and I might have something a little extra for you.\""; goto L_Close; L_Done: mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Thanks a bunch, buisness is booming!\""; - mes "\"For your hard work take this.\""; + mes "\"Thanks a bunch, business is booming!\""; + mes "\"Please, take this for all your hard work.\""; next; set Zeny, Zeny + $@delivery_money; getexp ($@delivery_exp_mod * BaseLevel), 0; @@ -325,12 +330,12 @@ L_Done: L_Inventory: mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"Oh, you're carrying a lot of things. Come back when you have more room.\""; + mes "\"Oh my. You're carrying quite a lot. Come back when you have more room.\""; goto L_Close; L_NoItem: mes "[Kylian]"; - mes "\"I don't see it! Are you trying to tease me? This is not funny!\""; + mes "\"I don't see it! Are you trying to tease me? This isn't funny!\""; goto L_Close; L_Close: @@ -372,8 +377,8 @@ L_Menu: menu "Show Quest State", L_ShowState, "Set Quest State", L_SetState, - "Reset Timer to now", L_WorkTimer, - "Reset Timer + 24 hours", L_MoreWorkTimer, + "Reset Timer to Now", L_WorkTimer, + "Reset Timer + 24 Hours", L_MoreWorkTimer, "Close.", L_Close; L_ShowState: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50