From 8ef0339e829bb071f13ebee95ecfe8faf0183844 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: The Kandiman Date: Sat, 26 Mar 2011 21:30:33 -0400 Subject: More spelling and grammar corrections. --- npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt') diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt index 7c3b3465..51476106 100644 --- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt +++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ L_intro: next; menu "My name is "+strcharinfo(0)+". I heard you cry and decided to ask if you need help.",-; - mes "The child looks at you from head to toe and say: \"" +@madamsir$+ ", aren't you scared of me?\""; + mes "The child looks at you from head to toe and says: \"" +@madamsir$+ ", aren't you scared of me?\""; next; menu "No... Why would I be scared of you?",-; @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ L_return2: menu "Don't worry, you don't need to give me anything...",-; mes "[Aldred]"; - mes "\"Are you serious? That is why you are so great! But hey, I have an idea. What if you talk to my parents about this item? If it is not important or valuable, I don't think it would be a problem to let you keep it. And I really want to know if they are acting all weird because I lost it. Would you do this for me?\""; + mes "\"Are you serious? That is why you are so great! But hey, I have an idea. What if you talk to my parents about this thing? If it is not important or valuable, I don't think it would be a problem to let you keep it. And I really want to know if they are acting all weird because I lost it. Would you do this for me?\""; next; menu "Sounds interesting... But who are your parents?",-, @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ L_return4: "She said it makes her sad",-; mes "\"Ohh... really? I don't like when my mother gets sad... If this thing is making her feel bad, I should keep it away from her. \""; next; - mes "\"Well, I guess you can keep it, but don't show it to my mother again, she is already very sad. But now I am really curious, who would give a gift to my mother? There are so many strange things happening lately...\""; + mes "\"Well, I guess you can keep it, but don't show it to my mother again, she is already very sad. But now I am really curious, who else would give a gift to my mother? There are so many strange things happening lately...\""; getinventorylist; if (@inventorylist_count == 100) goto L_full; getitem "ScarabArmlet", 1; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50