From 5fb61b03b577161e35df12fde4afc381a0edd0db Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: TheKandiman Date: Wed, 26 Jan 2011 23:26:57 -0500 Subject: Spelling and grammar updates in NPC dialog for maps 018 to 032 --- npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt | 2 +- npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt | 12 ++++++------ npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt | 4 ++-- npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt | 2 +- 4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/021-2_Tulimshar') diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt index 18219a82..8fcddf81 100644 --- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt +++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/bakery.txt @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ L_lace_chococake: mes "[Riskim]"; mes "\"Please have a seat!\""; - mes "You watch at Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with the mixture."; + mes "You watch as Riskim melts the chocolate and stirs in the potion, then glazes a cake with the mixture."; mes "\"It's a bit more chocolatey than your average chocolate cake, of course...\""; next; diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt index 44126aa5..6727ea7d 100644 --- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt +++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/furquest.txt @@ -157,8 +157,8 @@ L_State_1: L_State_2: mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]"; mes "\"Well, Winter Gloves are so fashionable for their lovable fur!"; - mes "Only the best furs can be saw for these gloves!"; - mes "But, as you see, I am a tailor, not a hunter! So, why don't you bring me the best fluffy's fur you can see?\""; + mes "Only the best furs can be used for these gloves!"; + mes "But, as you see, I am a tailor, not a hunter! So, why don't you bring me the best fluffy's fur you can find?\""; set QUEST_WG_state, 3; next; menu @@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ L_State_4_try: close; L_State_4_success: - mes "Agostine turns into a smile"; + mes "Agostine breaks into a smile"; next; mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]"; mes "\"It's perfect! Perfect! Good job, my friend! I will prepare your gloves right now!\""; @@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ L_State_5_pay: getitem "WinterGloves", 1; set QUEST_WG_state, 6; mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]"; - mes "\"Here they are. You will have the more fashionable hands in the world!\""; + mes "\"Here they are. You will have the most fashionable hands in the world!\""; close; L_State_5_nocash: @@ -287,7 +287,7 @@ L_State_11_try: close; L_State_11_success: - mes "Agostine turns into a smile"; + mes "Agostine breaks into a smile"; next; mes "[Agostine, The Legendary Tailor]"; mes "\"This one is good enough, my friend. Good job.\""; @@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ L_State_12: mes "And my payment, obviously. 15,000 GP is right.\""; next; menu - "Sure, here it is all.", L_State_12_pay, + "Sure, here it all is.", L_State_12_pay, "I missed something, I will be back soon!", -; close; diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt index 9ecfb219..f4f9d0de 100644 --- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt +++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/government_building.txt @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ // A clerk 021-2.gat,27,17,0 script Estard 107,{ mes "[Estard]"; - mes "\"Hello what Can I do for you?\""; + mes "\"Hello what can I do for you?\""; next; L_main: @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ L_marry_too_young: next; menu - "Can I atleast get wedding rings?", L_get_rings, + "Can I at least get wedding rings?", L_get_rings, "Thanks anyways.", -; close; diff --git a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt index 556a7141..5d675e3c 100644 --- a/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt +++ b/npc/021-2_Tulimshar/heathin.txt @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ L_Heathin_Terranite_Yes: next; mes "Heathin thinks for a moment."; next; - mes "\"Ah, I know! I will make a helm... Well, more like a hood, since it will woven.\""; + mes "\"Ah, I know! I will make a helm... Well, more like a hood, since it will be woven.\""; next; mes "\"It will require a great amount of heat, if the rumors are to be believed. For this, I will need 100 [Coal] to keep my forge burning hot. I will also need 10 [Terranite Ore] to make the armor. Of course, such work does not come cheap. While I may enjoy my work, my time and effort is very valuable. To compensate my efforts I will need 200,000 gold pieces. Please come back with the gold, [Coal] and ore and I'll make this hood for you.\""; close; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50