From 5447b0a377b86f3d1190fcc99ae6efcaa5a91d49 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Patrick O'Neal Date: Mon, 22 Apr 2013 13:24:47 -0500 Subject: Minor spelling and grammatical fixes --- world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt b/world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt index f381e684..6da0b1dc 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/011-1/auldsbel.txt @@ -808,7 +808,7 @@ L_component_quest_1: delitem "ConcentrationPotion", 1; set Zeny, Zeny + 2500; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; - mes "\"Ah, excellent, excellent! These are precisely what I needed. Here are another 2,500 GP to compensate you for your efforts.\""; + mes "\"Ah, excellent, excellent! These are precisely what I needed. Here is another 2,500 GP to compensate you for your efforts.\""; mes "[You gain 500 experience points]"; getexp 500, 0; set @Q_component_quest, 2; @@ -821,7 +821,7 @@ L_component_quest_2: mes "\"Ah! Excellent! Yes, yes, indeed I need help. I have managed to transmute the components you brought me into a liquid that I believe to be a demetamorphosis stock, but it seems that the details still need some fine-tuning, and I am out of silk cocoons...\""; next; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; - mes "\"I would like to run the next batch of experiments on a larger scale, though. Would you be so kind as to fetch me some one hundred silk cocoons, please?\""; + mes "\"I would like to run the next batch of experiments on a larger scale, though. Would you be so kind as to fetch me one hundred silk cocoons, please?\""; next; menu "One hundred cocoons, here you are.", -, @@ -831,7 +831,7 @@ L_component_quest_2: delitem "SilkCocoon", 100; set Zeny, Zeny + 5000; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; - mes "\"Splendid, splendid! Here are 5,000 GP for you.\""; + mes "\"Splendid, splendid! Here is 5,000 GP for you.\""; mes "Auldsbel attempts to cram the cocoons into his pockets, with little success. Finally he gives up and takes them into his hut."; mes "[You gain 2,000 experience points]"; getexp 2000, 0; @@ -875,7 +875,7 @@ L_component_quest_4: mes "\"But I was wondering whether creatures that already can auto-transmute-- or metamorphose, as some people call it-- might not allow themselves to be subjected to magical transmutation more easily... Still, all of my demetamorphosis attempts so far have failed.\""; next; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; - mes "\"I am thinking of injecting the life force of another creature, perhaps using some astral channelling. Snakes sound most promising, as they have a similar physical shape but a strong life force.\""; + mes "\"I am thinking of injecting the life force of another creature, perhaps using some astral channeling. Snakes sound most promising, as they have a similar physical shape but a strong life force.\""; next; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; mes "\"Could you get me twenty regular, cave, and mountain snake tongues, please? So a total of sixty tongues. This is where most of their life force is concentrated, incidentally.\""; @@ -902,7 +902,7 @@ L_component_quest_4: callsub S_update_var; next; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; - mes "Auldsbel focuses on the bundle of snake tongues, which begin to assume a bright red colour, then start to glow. Yellow sparks drop to the ground, as Auldsbel rolls the tongues into a ball."; + mes "Auldsbel focuses on the bundle of snake tongues, which begins to assume a bright red colour, then start to glow. Yellow sparks drop to the ground, as Auldsbel rolls the tongues into a ball."; next; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; mes "He tosses in a cocoon, then squeezes everything together. A bright red flash blinds you momentarily."; @@ -927,7 +927,7 @@ L_component_quest_5: delitem "GrassSnakeTongue", 50; set Zeny, Zeny + 10000; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; - mes "\"Excellent! Here are 10,000 GP for you, and now let's see how this goes.\""; + mes "\"Excellent! Here is 10,000 GP for you, and now let's see how this goes.\""; mes "[You gain 100,000 experience points]"; getexp 100000, 0; set @Q_component_quest, 6; @@ -1098,7 +1098,7 @@ LL_student_start: mes "\"Now, listen carefully: to make a short tank top out of three pieces of cloth, you must use the invocation '" + getspellinvocation("make-short-tanktop") + "'.\""; next; mes "[Auldsbel the Wizard]"; - mes "\"But be careful; transmutations can go wrong, and that can injure you. When you have some more overall spellcasting practice, come back to me.\""; + mes "\"But be careful; transmutations can go wrong, and that can injure you. When you have more overall spellcasting practice, come back to me.\""; next; goto L_main_menu; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50