From 85eba47228ccfaed69a53ac333776edb4fc4ccdb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: jesusalva <cpntb1@ymail.com>
Date: Wed, 7 Feb 2018 12:23:57 -0200
Subject: Fix bugs in AyashaT, and basic grammar check at Ayasha.

---
 npc/005-1/ayasha.txt   | 14 +++++++-------
 npc/005-1/movetest.txt |  8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

(limited to 'npc/005-1')

diff --git a/npc/005-1/ayasha.txt b/npc/005-1/ayasha.txt
index f47968c48..a59b586df 100644
--- a/npc/005-1/ayasha.txt
+++ b/npc/005-1/ayasha.txt
@@ -19,11 +19,11 @@
     if (.@has == 0)
     {
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("Hello can you help me for find all kids");
+            l("Hello! can you help me for find all kids?");
         do
         {
             select
-                l("Yes"),
+                l("Yes!"),
                 menuaction(l("Quit"));
 
             switch (@menu)
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
     else if (.@has == 2)
     {
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("Thank you, there is your reward");
+            l("Thank you, here is your reward.");
             narrator("You receive 30 exp.");
         getexp 30, 0;
         setq CandorQuest_HAS, 3;
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@
         close;
     }
 
-    closedialog;
-    goodbye;
+    //closedialog;
+    //goodbye;
     close;
 
 OnInit:
@@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ OnInit:
 
 
 function	script	CheckEnfant	{
-    .questCheck = .questCheck + 1;
+    .questCheck = .questCheck + 1; // NOTE: Do we really want this as a **NPC** variable? These affects other players, right?
             l("Oh Welcome then.");
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("Oh! You found me well played !.");
+            l("Oh! You found me. Well played!");
             narrator("You receive 5 exp.");
     if (.questCheck == 6)
     {
diff --git a/npc/005-1/movetest.txt b/npc/005-1/movetest.txt
index f69a20ab4..21868c2d9 100644
--- a/npc/005-1/movetest.txt
+++ b/npc/005-1/movetest.txt
@@ -12,16 +12,16 @@ OnTimer1000:
 
 OnInit:
     initpath "move", 44, 35,
-             "dir", TOP, 0,
+             //"dir", TOP, 0,
              "wait", 2, 0,
              "move", 51, 81,
-             "dir", DOWN, 0,
+             //"dir", DOWN, 0,
              "wait", 2, 0,""
              "Mmove", 50, 88,
-             "dir", DOWN, 0,
+             //"dir", DOWN, 0,
              "wait", 2, 0;
 
     initialmove;
     initnpctimer;
     .distance = 5;
-}
\ No newline at end of file
+}
-- 
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