From 00f855121b78fa6fe21407686137aca8316d9490 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: NetSysFire <59517351+NetSysFire@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 11 Jul 2022 21:44:58 +0200 Subject: some typo fixes and rewording --- npc/003-1/gladys.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/npc/003-1/gladys.txt b/npc/003-1/gladys.txt index 9951b45ae..2262b9203 100644 --- a/npc/003-1/gladys.txt +++ b/npc/003-1/gladys.txt @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ mes ""; menu l("What is the Alliance?"), L_What, - l("Why it sucks?"), L_Why, + l("Why does it suck?"), L_Why, l("Well, too bad!"), L_Close; L_What: @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ L_AllianceMenu: mes ""; menu l("Who composes the Alliance?"), L_Members, - l("What are the Alliance tasks?"), L_Tasks, + l("What are the tasks of the Alliance?"), L_Tasks, l("Do you think I could join the Alliance?"), L_Join, l("I have to go. See you later."), L_Close; @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ L_Why: next; mesq l("In the end, they decide the defensive measures, and they even set curfews!"); next; - mesq l("They also determine rules, and enforces them. We live under a disguised dictatorship."); + mesq l("They also determine rules, and enforce them. We live under a disguised dictatorship."); next; mesq l("But what I really hate is that they forbid gossiping."); next; @@ -60,9 +60,9 @@ L_Members: L_Tasks: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Their main tasks are ensuring trade, protecting the cities from monster invasions, and guarding the Mana Stones."); + mesq l("Their main tasks are ensuring fair trading, protecting the cities from monster invasions, and guarding the Mana Stones."); next; - mesq l("They also recently took over some city affairs. It's good they're protecting us, but I'm afraid of they creeping in our lives!"); + mesq l("They also recently took over some city affairs. It's good they're protecting us, but I'm afraid of them creeping into our lives!"); next; goto L_AllianceMenu; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50