From 9bf115afded2f22a06c99e22a1f864b5c97d83ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Vreality Date: Mon, 5 May 2014 06:49:13 -0500 Subject: Dialogue changes to NPCs Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf." Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog Improved grammar and wording Replaced ". " with ". " Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – "). MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- world/map/npc/functions/travelers.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/functions/travelers.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/functions/travelers.txt b/world/map/npc/functions/travelers.txt index 76e96bf7..7aa0d4b1 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/functions/travelers.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/functions/travelers.txt @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ L_Return: function|script|Traveler|, { mes "["+@NpcName$+"]"; - mes "\"Greetings. I am "+@NpcName$+" the Traveler.\""; + mes "\"Greetings. I am "+@NpcName$+" the Traveler.\""; next; if (TravelFound & $@tut_bit) @@ -246,19 +246,19 @@ L_TravelCandor: L_TravelNo: mes "["+@NpcName$+"]"; - mes "\"Perhaps some day you will have the courage to help us. Enjoy your stay here in Hurnscald.\""; + mes "\"Perhaps some day you will have the courage to help us.\""; close2; goto L_Clearvars; L_NoMoney: mes "["+@NpcName$+"]"; - mes "\"Sorry, you don't have enough money. Maybe next time.\""; + mes "\"Sorry, but you don't have enough money. Maybe next time.\""; close2; goto L_Clearvars; L_NoFound: mes "["+@NpcName$+"]"; - mes "\"Sorry, you don't have a memory from that location. Maybe next time.\""; + mes "\"Sorry, but you haven't visited a traveler yet at that location. You should talk to a traveler there so you can quickly travel there in the future.\""; close2; goto L_Clearvars; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50