From 5df19e3c04e55acad16f28c38ba29055c58d3b85 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dino Paskvan Date: Mon, 15 Jul 2013 16:05:44 +0200 Subject: Orum and Waric quest proofreading and editing All the NPCs involved in the quest have been edited, with help from Dyna. --- world/map/npc/017-1/flowerpentagram1.txt | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/017-1') diff --git a/world/map/npc/017-1/flowerpentagram1.txt b/world/map/npc/017-1/flowerpentagram1.txt index 5b09f346..817e6909 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/017-1/flowerpentagram1.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/017-1/flowerpentagram1.txt @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ if (OrumQuest > 17) goto L_PlacedFirstFlower; if (OrumQuest == 17) goto L_FirstFlower; - message strcharinfo(0), "Something is odd with this place."; + message strcharinfo(0), "Something is odd about this place."; end; L_FirstFlower: @@ -55,24 +55,24 @@ OnScorpionDeath: L_MonstersAlive: mes "As you get closer to the place, you feel an unnerving presence."; - mes "The place has recently been used to summon something! And the beings are still near!"; + mes "This place has recently been used to summon something! And the beings are still nearby!"; next; mes "You should get rid of them before attempting the summoning yourself."; goto L_Close; L_NoFlower: mes "You don't have the flower with you. Where did you put it?"; - mes "If you can't find it again, you'll have to tell Orum."; + mes "If you can't find it, you should talk to Orum again."; goto L_Close; L_PlacedFirstFlower: - mes "This is the place where you put the first of Orum's magical flowers."; - mes "You still feel a slight glowing of magic power around the place, waiting to be unleashed."; + mes "You placed the first of Orum's magical flowers on this spot."; + mes "You can still feel the magical power shimmering around this place, waiting to be unleashed."; goto L_Close; L_PlacedFifthFlower: - mes "This is the place where you put the first of Orum's magical flowers."; - mes "But after the pentagram was finished and the summoning happened, everything is back to normal with this spot."; + mes "This is where you placed the first of Orum's magical flowers."; + mes "However, now that the summoning spell has been cast, everything is back to normal here."; goto L_Close; L_Close: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50