From 9bf115afded2f22a06c99e22a1f864b5c97d83ed Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Vreality Date: Mon, 5 May 2014 06:49:13 -0500 Subject: Dialogue changes to NPCs Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf." Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog Improved grammar and wording Replaced ". " with ". " Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – "). MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit --- world/map/npc/005-1/tree.txt | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/005-1/tree.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/005-1/tree.txt b/world/map/npc/005-1/tree.txt index 626164b9..db6541fd 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/005-1/tree.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/005-1/tree.txt @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ L_givewater: getitem "EmptyBottle", 1; mes "[Dying Tree]"; - mes "You pour a bottle of water into the sand. The water dissipates quickly, without any effect."; + mes "You pour a bottle of water into the sand. The water dissipates quickly, without any effect."; goto L_Close; L_no_water: @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ L_do_cut: mes "[Dying Tree]"; mes "You find a suitable branch and put your bone knife in position."; - mes "Holding the branch, you have an uneasy feeling-- as if something inside the tree were trying to resist you..."; + mes "Holding the branch, you have an uneasy feeling – as if something inside the tree were trying to resist you..."; mes "Do you want to continue cutting?"; next; menu @@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ L_really_cut: L_no_boneknife: mes "[Dying Tree]"; - mes "Try as you might, you can't seem to find a way to cut off a branch. Perhaps you need a different tool for cutting?"; + mes "Try as you might, you can't seem to find a way to cut off a branch. Perhaps you need a different tool for cutting?"; goto L_Close; L_happy: -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2