From f4c9e268e473867a88830fdf35f3012e86b90718 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kess Vargavind <vargavind@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 31 Oct 2009 11:07:34 +0100
Subject: Tweaks of item descriptions

Also reserving 'effect' for actual gameplay effects.
---
 items.xml | 21 ++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)

(limited to 'items.xml')

diff --git a/items.xml b/items.xml
index b2f38f25..ae472314 100644
--- a/items.xml
+++ b/items.xml
@@ -2649,8 +2649,8 @@
         max-per-slot="25"/>
     <item id="780"
         image="generic-eyeball.png"
-        name="Undead eye"
-        description="an eye from a zombie."
+        name="Undead Eye"
+        description="An eye from a zombie."
         effect=""
         type="generic"
         weight="4"
@@ -2681,7 +2681,7 @@
     <item id="783"
 	image="equipment/chest/valentine-dress.png|R:#BF0E08"
 	name="Platyna Red Dress"
-	description="A silken dress with soft lace trim. If you damage it, you'll never get it to look good again. In sepcial Platyna red."
+	description="A silken dress with soft lace trim. If you damage it, you'll never get it to look good again. In special Platyna red."
 	effect="Defense: +15"
 	type="equip-torso"
 	weight="25"
@@ -2996,8 +2996,7 @@
     <item id="1229"
         image="generic-caramelapple.png"
         name="Caramel Apple"
-        description="A caramel coated apple, complete with stick."
-        effect="Rots teeth, tastes good."
+        description="A caramel coated apple, complete with stick. Rots teeth, tastes good."
         type="generic"
         weight="5"
         max-per-slot="200"/>
@@ -3005,8 +3004,7 @@
     <item id="1230"
         image="generic-lollipop.png|W:#2502d6"
         name="Booberry Blue Lollipop"
-        description="A Lollipop."
-        effect="Mmm."
+        description="A lollipop. Mmm."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"
         max-per-slot="200"/>
@@ -3014,8 +3012,7 @@
     <item id="1231"
         image="generic-lollipop.png|W:#00ba16"
         name="Ghastly Green Lollipop"
-        description="A Lollipop."
-        effect="Tasty."
+        description="A lollipop. Tasty."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"
         max-per-slot="200"/>
@@ -3023,8 +3020,7 @@
     <item id="1232"
         image="generic-lollipop.png|W:#e00418"
         name="Blood Red Lollipop"
-        description="A Lollipop."
-        effect="Yum."
+        description="A lollipop. Yum."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"
         max-per-slot="200"/>
@@ -3032,8 +3028,7 @@
     <item id="1233"
         image="generic-fakefangs.png"
         name="Cheap Plastic Fangs"
-        description="A costumed dracula's must."
-        effect="Doesn't suck.. blood."
+        description="A costumed Dracula's must. Doesn't really suck blood."
         type="generic"
         weight="1"
         max-per-slot="100"/>
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