From b425bbd7d291533d556c034252d7dc8f89796984 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jessica Tölke Date: Thu, 2 Jun 2011 22:40:34 +0200 Subject: scorpion fight, story about hasan in sorfina, some small fixes --- npc/042-2/sorfina.txt | 45 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 29 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/042-2/sorfina.txt') diff --git a/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt b/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt index d82dc588..ab5dd9f5 100644 --- a/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt +++ b/npc/042-2/sorfina.txt @@ -17,8 +17,9 @@ mes "\"I'm glad you're feeling better now. You're not used to the hot weather, right?"; mes "Are you here to look for some work? Many young people come to our Tulimshar for this reason.\""; next; - mes "\"I can tell you some useful things, if you to hear.\""; + mes "\"I can tell you some useful things, if you want to hear.\""; mes "\"Oh, and by the way my name is Sorfina.\""; + next; menu "That would be great!",L_Tut, "No, thanks. I already know how things are going.",L_SkipTut; @@ -70,7 +71,7 @@ L_Clothes: L_Again: mes "[Sorfina]"; mes "\"Welcome back! Do you have any questions?\""; - + next; if (hasan) menu "A guy named Hasan doesn't let me enter main Tulimshar.",L_Hasan, @@ -106,8 +107,8 @@ L_Talk: mes "\"If you want to talk to other adventurers, press Enter to open your chat window."; mes "Then type your message and press Enter to send.\""; next; - mes "\"You may want to talk privately to another adventuerer sometimes. In that case you can whisper."; - mes "After pressing Enter, type '/whisper [name] [message]'."; + mes "\"You may want to talk privately to another adventurer sometimes. In that case you can whisper."; + mes "After pressing Enter type '/whisper [name] [message]'."; mes "Or you can right click on someone and choose the whisper option.\""; next; mes "\"Press F7 to show and hide your chat window.\""; @@ -116,16 +117,15 @@ L_Talk: L_Items: mes "[Sorfina]"; mes "\"There are three types of items."; - mes "They can be Consumables, Equipment, or Miscellaneous\""; + mes "They can be Consumables, Equipment, or Miscellaneous.\""; next; mes "\"Consumable items such as Potions, can be used only once."; - mes "After use, they will disappear from your inventory.\""; + mes "After use, they will disappear from your inventory."; + mes "There are some rare items that can be used but don't get consumed."; next; - mes "\"Equipment items like Armors, Weapons, Accessories"; - mes "can be equipped for fashionable purposes or to raise your status.\""; + mes "\"Equipment items like Armors, Weapons, Accessories can be equipped for fashionable purposes or to raise your status.\""; next; - mes "\"Miscellaneous items such as maggot slime, are used"; - mes "in creating other items, or just to trade and sell.\""; + mes "\"Miscellaneous items such as maggot slime, are used in creating other items, or just to trade and sell.\""; next; mes "\"Press F3 to open your inventory."; mes "When placing your cursor over an item there, you can see a box with some informations about that item.\""; @@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ L_Aidan: mes "We're in the north of Tulimshar here, so you have to walk across the town.\""; next; mes "\"When you leave this area to the Southeast, you'll come to the docks."; - mes "Follow the street to the south to pass the old towen gates.\""; + mes "Follow the street to the south to pass the old town gates.\""; next; mes "\"Turn West at the next intersection. You'll pass by the gates of Tulimshar's famos magic school there."; mes "Just follow the street to the south and you'll reach the bazaar.\""; @@ -164,11 +164,23 @@ L_Hasan: mes "She shakes her head."; next; mes "[Sorfina]"; - mes "\This guy was a plague ever since. TODO: add story\""; - // some backstory, hasan living here as a child, always making trouble - // but unfortunately very strong - // player question: weak point - // answer: frightened of scropions + mes "\This guy was a plague ever since. He's always causing trouble.\""; + next; + mes "\"And his father... Well, one day his father thought he should teach Hasan a lesson.\""; + next; + mes "\"He took him in the desert and then left him there!"; + mes "Hasan was only seven years old!\""; + next; + mes "\"I never understood how someone can do something like that to a child, even if it's a rascal like Hasan.\""; + next; + mes "\"Anyway, Hasan tried to find his way back home, but stumbled in a nest of scorpions!\""; + mes "She shakes her head."; + next; + mes "\"If Valon wouldn't have come along that moment, Hasan would have died that day.\""; + next; + mes "\"However, the scorpions poison caused a bad fever and after Hasan had recovered from that, he was even more malicious than before.\""; + mes "She sighs."; + next; if (hasan == 1) set hasan, 2; close; @@ -176,6 +188,7 @@ L_Hasan: L_SkipTut: mes "[Sorfina]"; mes "\"Really? You seem quite unexperienced. Listening to some advices won't hurt.\""; + next; menu "Thinking about it twice... please tell me.",L_Tut, "Yeah, but thanks for the offer. Bye",-; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50