From 4eed1c99a669e5a8dc331ba34e8bbe8867be21b4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Sini Ruohomaa Date: Mon, 23 Aug 2010 23:31:01 +0300 Subject: Language checks and standardization++. --- npc/002-3_Desert_mines/naem.txt | 35 +++++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 19 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/002-3_Desert_mines/naem.txt') diff --git a/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/naem.txt b/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/naem.txt index 74d8465f..aca3e0c2 100644 --- a/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/naem.txt +++ b/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/naem.txt @@ -18,27 +18,28 @@ if (TMW_Quest == 21) goto L_Naem_Okay; mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Just mining away. Lots of work to do.\""; + mes "\"I'm just mining away here. Lots of work to do.\""; close; L_Naem_Okay: set TMW_Quest, 22; mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Oh hello there. Nickos wanted you to check on me? Yeah, I'm okay.\""; + mes "\"Oh, hello there. Nickos wanted you to check on me? Yeah, you can tell him I'm okay.\""; close; L_Naem_Cool: mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Yeah, I'm cool. Just mining away.\""; + mes "\"Yeah, I'm cool. Just mining away here.\""; close; L_Naem_Help_1: set TMW_Quest, 25; mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Oh, you are here to help move my bags? Cool, I've got a few ready to go. Go ahead and take this one.\""; + mes "\"Oh, you are here to help move my bags? Cool, I've got a few ready to go. Go ahead and take this one!\""; next; - mes "Naem hands you a bag of ore"; + mes "Naem hands you a bag of ore."; next; + mes "[Naem]"; mes "\"After you deliver that one to Nathan, come on back, I've got a couple more ready to go.\""; close; @@ -49,15 +50,15 @@ L_Naem_Waits_1: L_Naem_Help_2: set TMW_Quest, 27; - mes "[Naem]"; - mes "Naem Gives you a bag of ore."; + mes "Naem gives you a bag of ore."; next; - mes "\"Just one more after this one and we'll be caught up.\""; + mes "[Naem]"; + mes "\"Just one more after this one and we'll be all caught up!\""; close; L_Naem_Waits_2: mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Just one more bag of ore after the one you got and we'll be caught up.\""; + mes "\"Just one more bag of ore after the one you got and we'll be all caught up!\""; close; L_Naem_Help_3: @@ -70,19 +71,21 @@ L_Naem_Help_3: L_Naem_Waits_3: mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"You got my last sack. Just give it to Nathan and we'll be caught up.\""; + mes "\"You got my last sack already. Just give it to Nathan and we'll have caught up.\""; close; L_Naem_Great: mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Hi ho! It's off to work I go! I work everyday for meager pay, a miner's life for me.\""; + mes "\"Hi ho! It's off to work I go! I work every day for meager pay, a miner's life for me...\""; close; L_Naem_Memory: + mes "You see Naem grimacing in pain as you approach."; + next; mes "[Naem]"; mes "\"Oh, my head! Some rocks fell on me and bonked me pretty good. I'm still a little sore.\""; menu - "Don't you got a key so I can go to the underground palace?", L_Naem_Palace_No, + "Don't you have a key so I can go to the underground palace?", L_Naem_Palace_No, "You should be more careful.", L_Naem_Duh; close; @@ -94,7 +97,7 @@ L_Naem_Duh: L_Naem_Palace_No: set TMW_Quest, 33; mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Oh no! I lost the key! Don't fear though, talk to Lieutenant Dausen about getting the spare key.\""; + mes "\"Oh no! I lost the key! Don't worry though, talk to Lieutenant Dausen about getting the spare key.\""; close; L_Naem_Lt: @@ -104,7 +107,7 @@ L_Naem_Lt: L_Naem_Code: mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Oh you got the key. That is good. All I remember about the code is you have to put the key into the buttons around the mine in a certain order and turn them in a certain order and it will unlock the underground palace. Good luck.\""; + mes "\"Oh, you got the key. That is good! But my head still hurts... All I remember about the code is you have to put the key into the key hole buttons around the mine in a certain order and turn them in a certain order and it will unlock the underground palace. Sorry, that's all I have for you. Good luck!\""; close; L_Naem_Gloves: @@ -113,7 +116,7 @@ L_Naem_Gloves: set Naem_Quest_Done, 1; getitem "MinerGloves", 1; mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"Hey, good job on getting that together. Take these gloves, they might prove useful in the underground palace.\""; + mes "\"Hey, good job on getting that together! Take these gloves, they might prove useful in the underground palace.\""; close; L_Naem_TooMany: @@ -123,7 +126,7 @@ L_Naem_TooMany: L_Naem_Complete: mes "[Naem]"; - mes "\"A miner's life for me!\""; + mes "\"Yo-ho-ho, a miner's life for me!\""; close; } -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2